DearRalph,Imanewcomerhereofasm-优题课

第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
A philosophy （哲学）professor walks in to give his class the exam.
Place his chair on his desk, the professor says to the class, 76．
“Use everything you’ve learned in that course to prove this 77．
chair does not exist.” So, pencils are writing but erasers are 78．
erasing. The students had a hard time proving that this chair 79．
doesn’t exist except one student, whom spends thirty seconds 80．
writing his answer, and then turns his paper, which surprises 81．
his classmate. Time goes by, and the day comes when all 82．
the students get their final grades. For everyone’s surprise, the 83．
student who only wrote for thirty seconds gets a highly mark. 84．
His answer to the question is “What a chair?” 85．

第二卷
写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉；
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Tracy,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 76._______
me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77._______
He is very strict in me and often punishes me for 78 _______
leaving things lying around in the house when he did this 79._______
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80._______
follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.” 81._______
Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, 82._______
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 83._______
bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk 84._______
with him but he never listen. Please, help me. 85._______
Puzzled

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
（1）此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，
并用斜线划掉。
（2）此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧, 在该行右边横线上写出该加词。
（3）此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

As is know, when senior students graduate from school, most
of their textbooks are thrown away, which are still in a good
condition. What a waste it is! I quite agree to the suggestion we
should recycle these textbooks. For one thing, recycle textbooks
can save a lot of natural materials, which is used to make
textbooks. For other, senior students may have plenty of useful
notes over the pages. They are very helpful to those textbook users.
What’s worse, the cost of the books will unload some burden of the
families of the students. Actually in Australia and any other countries,
recycling textbooks is popular but it gives us a good example.
Why can’t we have a try?

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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
　　此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
　　A very young new officer was at a railway station.
　　He Was on his way visit to his mother in another town. 76．_______________
　　And he wanted to telephone to her the time of his train, 77．_______________
　　so that she should meet him at the station in her car.78．_______________
　　He looked in all his pocket, but found that he did not 79．_______________
　　have the right money for the phone. So he went out
　　and looked round for anyone to help him. 80．_______________
　　At last he stopped an old soldier passed by，and 81．_______________
　　said, “Have you got any change for ten pence?”
　　“Wait a moment，”the soldier says，“Let me have a look.”82．_______________
　　“Don’t you know what to speak to an officer?”the 83．_______________
　　officer said angry.“Now start again. Have you got 84．_______________
　　any change for ten pence?”“No sir, ” the old soldier
answered quickly. 85．_______________

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求在答题卡上改正所给短文中的错误，请根据上下文对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。
此行错一个词：在错词下画一横线，在在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
John Brown is London taxi driver who love going to the
Theatre .Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play.
The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some
Reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He
Wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it, So two hours
Before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of
His taxi, Perhaps someone who wanted ∧ see the play would take
Them. However, while John went back home, the tickets were
Still there. In ~~the~~ fact ,there were four tickets on the seat.
Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them!