假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
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completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at 8 in Friday evening.
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At first, I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football
match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a
game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football.
During the World Cup in 2006, my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport.
Seeing him strongly interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit
down to watch the game. I found game exciting, and my dad explained for the rules.
七、Error correction(短文改错)10分
Mr.Smith was a biology professor,but he had 1._________
a lot of animal bones that he was very proud.Then 2._________
one year he managed to get a better job in others 3._________
university.As he was busy at the work,his wife asked 4._________
three men to remove all their things to the new house. 5._________
One of them was just about throw a large box into the 6._________
truck with all the other things,then Mrs.Smith ran 7._________
out and said,“Please treat the box gentle! It has 8._________
all of my husband's bones in it.” Heard this,the 9._________
man was so surprising that he nearly dropped it on his feet.10._________
七、Error correction(短文改错)10分
Coffee houses can be seen anywhere in America. 1._________
The Europeans brought the idea with them.Soon it 2._________
became of their favorite drink.Today people in the 3._________
USA drink more coffee than people in any country. 4._________
They drink them at breakfast,at lunch and between 5._________
meal,and not only at home but also at work.Coffee 6._________
is also drinking around the world.Some people like 7._________
coffee is very black and very strong.But others like 8._________
coffee with cream or sugar,or cream and sugar with 9._________
it.Now coffee has become a world-widely drink. 10._________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，共15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
It rained very hardly last summer and the little 44．
stream near our house became big river．It burst 45．
through the bank．The fields all round was soon full 46．
of water．Luckily，the water didn’t reach any of the 47．
house in our village．But the bursting water from the 48．
river carried away our wooden bridge，that was over 49．
three hundred of years old．We were very sorry to 50．
lose the oldest thing we have had for such a 51．
long time．We will build a new bridge，so it will 52．
not be so familiar than the one we had before！ 53．
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第三部分：写作（共二节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study 56________
hard, hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience 57________
pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected 58 ________
because I didn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor 59 ________
peasant family, but I really know life is not easy. All the 60 ________
things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could 61 ________
lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “no pains, no 62 ________
gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother’s expectation and 63 ________
have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mother’s push and the 64________
pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing. 65________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该次，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Paul,
How is everything? I’m writing to tell you about
the race be held at 2:00 pm next Tuesday. You are one 76. _____
of the ten runner in the race, and you77. _____
need to be at school gate by 1:30 pm that day. The78. _____
race began at 1:40. All racers will start from the gate. Then79. _____
turn right and run along Zhongshan Road till you see the80. _____
traffic lights there you’ll turn right again and keep running81. _____
along Guang’an Street till you will come to the Post Office. 82. _____
There turn right, go on to the bank of the river, crossing the bridge 83. _____
and take a left turn. Finally, they are to reach the finish line. 84. _____
By the way, if you want much information, please let me know. 85. _____
Yours,
Allan