One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
第五部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2、只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
People like swimming in the summer because water makes them to feel cool. However, these years many people died while they were enjoyed themselves in water, and some of them were stud
ents. So some people are still not carefully in swimming. They often think they swim such well that nothing will happen on them in water. On hot summer days, if you will go swimming, remember that many good swimmer have died in water. They died because they were not careful, so don’t get into water when you are lonely. If you remember this, swimming will be safer.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I still remember on the first day when I came to college.
It was a sunny day. Everything seems fresh to me. All the
students were exciting. I was, too. I had long dreamed
of becoming a college student. Years late, my dream
had come true. This was really turning point in my life. I
looked at the beautiful classroom buildings. I felt proud for my
college. I knew that going to college would be a good chance
to get a great deal of knowledges, which would be useful
for your future career. Meanwhile I knew that studying at college
was a great challenge to me. H had to learn what to overcome the
difficulties in my study and life at college.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr Anderson,
I’m not sure whether you can remember me,and we met in Bethany last
year．It was at your daughter wedding．You and me had a pleasant talk and I
told you a little about my job as reporter for the New York Times．At that
time I do like to stay in New York,but now I’d like to get a job back in my
town．My problem is that have been away for a longer time that I have not
some job contacts（关系） in Bethany．That’s why I’m writing for you ．I
would appreciate if you could put me in touch with anyone who could help
me and advise me．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Working in a international company in New York, Bill used
to go to the barber's during working hours to have his hair
cut, which, of course,∧against the rule: Office workers had to
have their hair cut in their own times．While Bill was at
the barber's one day, the manager came in by the accident to
have his own hair cut．Bill tried to hide his face immediate
he saw the manager, but the manager recognized himself．When
asking why he was having his hair cut in office time,
Bill said calmly, “It grows in office time.” “No all of it,”
said the manager．“Some of it grow in your own time.”
“But I am not having it all cut off.” Bill replied.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的
词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need ___________
is someone to rely on. For many years, she was Mum.___________
My mother was a career woman and had her own___________
problems to take care, but when I needed her, she___________
was always there. Her strength came from anywhere___________
I don’t quite know, somewhere very deep. She was so
strong that she would never break down, even while I___________
went to her with all my little-boy problems and shout___________
at her. Her strength made me stronger and gave to me___________
courage to try things other thought were impossible. A ___________
Helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. ___________