假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was fine on April 8, 2010 .That day all the students in our class go to the suburb of our city to plant trees. On we arriving at the planting place at 8 o’clock , the teacher asked each of us to plant 5 trees at least. Then we set out digging, planting and watering. All of us were going all out finish our task, afraid of falling behind. Between us, our monitor set a good example to us. In spite of his illness, he accepted his task and finished it ahead of the time. Then he went on to help other without a little rest. After work, he was wet all over. He looked pale, and he was full of joy. Looked at the lines of young trees, we smiled pleasant, forgetting our tiredness.
Here are the cats Auntie brought us. Take good care of it.
She loves swimming. It keeps she fit.
Here are some letters for you and he.
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report,2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home,4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful.9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly.10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day,6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA.8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.