文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!
阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As a person in modern society，you should never forget that everyone needs encouragement. And everybody who receives it is changed by it. It was novelist Mark Twain who said :“One compliment can keep me going for a whole month.”
The impact that encouragement makes on people can be deep and significant. A word of encouragement from a teacher to a child can change a life. A word of encouragement from a spouse
can save a marriage. A word of encouragement from a leader can inspire a person to reach his potential. Like Zig Ziglar says,” You never know when a few sincere words can have an impact on a life.”
I’ve read that the 19th century writer Walt Whitman struggled for years to get anyone interested in his poetry. In the midst of his discouragement，Whitman received a life-changing letter from an admirer of his work. The note read:“ Dear sir, I am not blind to the worth of the wonderful gift of Leaves of Grass. I find it the most extraordinary piece of wit and wisdom that America has yet contributed. I greet you at the beginning of a great career.” It was signed by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
Whitman enjoyed a long career and is now considered one of the giants of' American literature. But when times were tough，he needed encouragement to keep him going.
This season is the perfect time to give a gift everybody wants—and everyone needs.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2．然后以约120个词就¨鼓励对人生的影响”进行议论，内容包括：
(1) 以事例说明鼓励对人的影响；
(2) 谈谈你的认识或感想。
【写作要求】
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
基础写作(共1题，满分15分)
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息，介绍一下吴斌。
| 姓名：吴斌 出生日期：1965年3月8日 出 生 地：浙江杭州 事迹介绍： 1. 2012年5月29日中午，吴斌驾驶长途车行驶在无锡至杭州路段。突然一块金属板穿透挡风玻璃砸向吴斌； 2. 吴斌虽然严重受伤，但在倒下前，他刹车（brake）、换挡，缓行路边停车，还对车上的24名乘客说不要在高速路上乱走； 3. 吴斌的肝脏几乎被击碎，最终于6月1日不幸去世。 相关报道： 1.吴斌的英雄事迹深深感动了社会各界； 2.他被称之为“最美司机”。 |
参考词汇：挡风玻璃windscreen换挡shift gears肝脏 liver
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
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假定你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手Justin Bieber(贾斯汀·比伯)下个月将到你市演出。近日你准备和几个朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的加拿大笔友Fred发一封邮件，表明你们喜欢该歌手的理由(如：他很迷人，他的歌能让人感受到真爱等)，并希望Fred就如何办好歌迷俱乐部提出一些建议。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇：低碳生活(lowcarbon life)；节能(energy saving)
注意
1．词数：120词左右；
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone，
I_am_Li_Hua_from_Xingguang_Middle_School._The_topic_of_my_speech_is_“Let's_Ride_Bicycles”．
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Thank you !
假设你是某一中学高中生，名字叫李华，你于2013年8月31日收到了笔友Peter的来信，请仔细阅读来信，然后回复一封电子邮件告知你的朋友有关你的学校的一些情况，
内容包括：1. 人际关系（师生关系、生生关系等）
2. 学习情况（自己学习情况、学生互助、教师指导等）
3. 学校课余活动（课外文体活动、社会实践、兴趣小组活动等）
要求: (1) 字数：120左右， (2) 可适当增加信息以使文章保持连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to hear from you last Friday. From your letter, I’ve learned a lot about Tanggu, where great changes have taken place in the past few years. It must be more beautiful than it used to be. I’m expecting to visit it sometime in the near future.
Now, I’m eager to know something about your school life. I will be delighted if you can tell me something about it.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter