假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Brad,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school. I feel uneasily recently. At home I feel like prisoner. I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet. The only thing I have to do it is studying. Every time I got a low mark, my parents will scold me sharply. There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate. Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help.
Best wishes,
LiPing
第二节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断;如无错误,在该行右边
In England boys and girls usually have two months to 76. ______________
rest after the final exams. Not only the riches but also factory 77. ______________
workers or bus drivers can take our children to the seaside for 78. ______________
their holidays. Why children like spending their summer 79. ______________
holidays on the seaside? It is why they like the sand, the sun, 80. ______________
the cool wind and the salt water here more than anything else. 81. ______________
Of course, there were lots of new things to see, nice things to 82. ______________
eat, and the exciting things to do , but it is the feelings of sand 83. ______________
under one’s feet, of cool wind and salt water on one’s skin, of 84. ______________
the warm sun on one’s back that makes the seaside what it is. 85. ______________
第二节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1.5分,满分15分)
When I was little, my mom once took me to America 76. ______________
to visit one of our relative. At that time I couldn’t speak 77. ______________
a word of English, but I was deep impressed by the 78. ______________
teenagers here. Their skin was bright like sunshine, 79. ______________
their eyes were blue but they always looked happy. 80. ______________
How time flies! I’m teenager myself now.A friend of 81. ______________
mine in Los Angeles often tells me he attends to various 82. ______________
clubs, plans for his future and never had a formal 83. ______________
exam in his school so far.All the students enjoy them at 84. ______________
school. That’s what I know about America teenagers. 85. ______________
第四部分:写作(共三节)
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76. _________
us English when I attended training class two 77. _________
years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. _________
for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. _________
her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. _________
especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. _________
to write English letters and reports correct. 82. _________
I still remember how she helped me for my 83. _________
English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm going to 84. _________
send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85. _________
六、短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 71 ______
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 72 ______
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 73 ______
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 74 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 75 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 76 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 77 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 78 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 79 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 80 ________
第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题 1.5 分, 满分 15 分)
In front of a shop, there was long line of 76._______
Bicycles. The parking attendant was busy with77._______
receiving and saw his customers off when a thief 78._______
got a chance to steal a bicycle. The thief locked the 79._______
bicycle, got on it and riding away. Seeing that, the attendant 80._______
shouted to the people who were passing by for help. And 81._______
unfortunately ,anybody reacted. Disappointed and 82._______
helplessly, the attendant watched the thief disappear. 83._______
Of course he had to pay the owner of the stealing 84._______
bicycle 400 yuan as compensation. 85._______