下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in studying in
Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching
The computer software. An old saying goes, Interest is the best teacher. I quite agree with this
idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in
foreign cultures or customs. To meet us curiosity, I read English stories every day. It seemed to be
the best “meal” of a day. As for a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the
key to succeed.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。全文共十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在正下方写出该加的词。
此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词正下方写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改只限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Hangzhou in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I am seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from the years 1984 and 1990. After that I went to the No. 20 MiddleSchool. The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry or computer.I liked English and computer best and I was very good at it. Last year I had won the first prize in the school computer competition. I have many hobbies now. I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sport are swimming in summer and skate in winter.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided real buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.
He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,so it was much better than the old one.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文章中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词出加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1， 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2， 只允许修改10 处， 多者 （从第11 处起）不计分。
All parents wish their children, especially junior high students, can go to top university and have a bright future. So they always expects their children to make fully use of their time to study . They don’t allow them watching TV ,play the computer games or go out to play with their friends . Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs.
In my opinion ,how our parents are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing , I think, is that they should learn to communicate with our parents, tell them that we’ll never let them down and will work harder earn trust and respect from them.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I’d like to telling you about my first surfing online
experience.
This summer vacation when the computer was connected with the Internet,
my parents and I sat in the front of the monitor together. My father asked me
download some stock software, which could enable him to buy and sell shares
online without going outside. My mother loved Korean soap operas, so I
downloaded some for her but also told her how she could watch them online. At the
end, I searched for some English study website to help improve my listening and
speaking English. The Internet has allowed him family to enjoy a more convenient,
relaxed and efficient life.
How about your Internet experiences? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school , I had an awful experience . At that time I was so
brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all
kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to
dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.
By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we
have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the
courage to correct them.