以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：-优题课

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用
斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much ____
money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle ____
who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. ____
He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents. ____
When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him ____
something really special, but because she was rich, she did not ____
know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her ____
town and explained what her problem was to one of the helpful ____
shop assistant. Finally she asked, “What do you have for ____
someone who has already got everything he wants or need .

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处中加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
v增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
v删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
v修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
v注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly : I could only speak a few words. But one and a half yeas later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “ If you try to , you can be No.1 !” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
Some years ago, my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and grass can be seen all over the hills. As time going by, people destroyed almost the whole forest grow more crops. To make matters worse, people let their cattles eat up the grass. So you can only see wasteland instead green forests now. As a result of, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers. Strongly winds also blow away the valuable soil lie on the top of the fields.
I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests but plant more trees to improve our living conditions.

仔细阅读下列句子，每句中均有一个错误，请找出并在横线上改正，请按下列情况改正：
该句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ / ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该句错一个词：把错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A day, I came across an old friend in a museum.
My friend was in his sixties. Therefore, he looked so
young. I asked him how he stayed young.
He told me take exercise was a good way
to keep health, such as, having a walk.
His office was 2 miles far away from his home .Every day
he went to work on foot instead taking a bus. He
also gave me some other suggestion to be in good
health. He thought how fun it was to do sports.
Heard what he said, I decided to take action.

In my hometown there used to a temple with a	76.
history of more than four hundred years. It lies in a	77.
valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful	78.
and famous that many tourists came visit it every day.	79.
They took photo; they wrote down their names on	80.
the walls; they were brought food and drink and left rubbish	81.
everywhere. One day some tourists did a fire to cook	82.
food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind	83.
blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly	84.
temple was burned out and only a little walls remained.	85.
The beautiful temple disappeared.