假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Han is a good friend of me. He made a deep impression with me the first time we met, and we became good friend. He is tall and thin. When I first met him, it is rainy and cold. He wore a white Tshirt and blue jeans, with a big smile on his face, that made him look sunny. He doesn't look very handsome, but bright. The glasses on his nose made it look bookish. When we talked I discovered that he was full of humorous. Seen that I hadn't brought a umbrella, he shared his, which made me feel warm. He seemed excellent and kind, but I was determined to learn from him.
（五）
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______
Best wishes,
Jane
（三）
A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78._______
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______
first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______
each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______
me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83._______
finally asked him why. "I find it great fun," she explained 84._______
it. "In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time 85._______
I've heard an American speak French with a German accent."
答案与简析：
76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______
下面是全国高考试题中的短文改错题。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 76. _____
Mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _____
Was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _____
the mountain, the three of them were very excited. As we 79. _____
climbed the mountain, we ed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _____
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81._____
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _____
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _____
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _____
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _____
head touched the pillow.
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear Mark,
It’s pity you can’t go over your lessons with us. We will take the English finally exam next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week. This is different about the exam is that it consisted of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing articles. We are supposing to go over our mid-term exam papers, textbooks and class notes to prepare from it. The grade is made up of three part. The final exam will make up of 55% of our final grade, the reach work 20% and the mid-term 25%. Please feel free to contact me unless you are still not clear about it. I hope you will recover soon or get a good mark in the exam.
Yours truly,
Li Ming