假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Meimei likes reading books. She often goes and borrows books from the school library. Though she likes reading, but she doesn’t take care of her books. She threw them everywhere, on the table, on the ground, and even under her bed. Her roommates often remind her this. But she turns a deaf ear to them. The bad habit didn’t bring him great trouble until yesterday. It was the deadline for two book. She looked everywhere in the room. Twenty minutes past but she still failed to find them. Meimei cried helpless. It was four thirty and Meimei had to go to the library, for it closed at five. She told a story to the librarian and asked for an extra day in tears. Looked at her in surprise, the librarian said, “How a careless girl! You returned them yesterday. Don’t you remember? ”
Mary was a pop star. She bought new house, and hired a man to painting the rooms in new colours. It was difficulty to get tickets for her show, because of everybody wanted to see it. So she decided to give the painter two of the best seat. She hoped that this would make him to work better. He took the tickets without saying something. She hears no more about him until the end of the month, then she got the painter's bill. On it was the words: "Three hour's watching you sing and dance: $ 6. After 5 pm I get two dollars an hour instead of one dollar."
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I take the school bus to school every day when I was young. Alvin, our bus driver, picked out twenty kids in our area and dropped me off after school. Because my family was poor, so my parents seldom bought snacks for me. About once the month, he would make a stop at a local stores and buy each of us an ice cream. The kindness that he showed was amazed. Remembering the kindness he showed, I called him up ten years late and thanked him. I told him that he probable didn’t remember me, but I still remembered him. I could sense the excitement in his voice when he thanked me calling.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词.
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分.
Dear President,
I’m going to study in my university this year. But I’m worried about the university life. So I’m writing to ask you for some helps. Firstly, it’s possible that I might be confusing by the sudden change of the environment and didn’t know how to handle it properly. Secondly, I’m afraid I can take good care of myself but might feel lonely. Being a little bit of careless, I might sometimes lose things. Finally, I might be unable to get used for the new climate and food. Could you tell me what to deal with the problems so that I can make my university life much easier and fruitful?
Yours,
Li Hua
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3.只允评修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many of us feel somehow nervously whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students' health but disturb their studies. So it’s necessary for our students to learn to relax. I think it's very important to have a right attitude for exams. Exams are only a means of checking how we have leaned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much the results of the exams. Before an exam, make a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind must help to reduce the pressure from the exam. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Beside, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Follow my advice and so you will enjoy your school life.