假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. It will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1,000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with our Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
第二节短文改错(共10小题,每题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中有十处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加,删减或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Dally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节:短文改错(共10 小题,每题1分,满分10 分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,
在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;在该行右边横线上写出该词,
并也用斜线划掉;该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧);在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;该行错一个词,在错的词下划一个横线;在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Are the years you spent at school best years of you life?1.
Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 2.
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 3.
were saying. They used to writing on the blackboard and ask4.
us difficult questions. We also had to do a plenty of homework, and 5.
hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of6.
rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 7.
at the public library, and late I decided to attend college. Now 8.
I really enjoy studying because I’m growing old and know what I9.
want it. When I was at school, I was just the wrong age!10.
第二节短文改错(共10小题,每题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中有十处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加,删减或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Dally,
Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
短文中有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下方写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What should you do when your parents become angrily? If yourparents got mad, try to have a conversation with themabout it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usuallywill try to change. But they will take some times to change becausethey always get angry, and that is all they know. Youmight have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect— like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that youfeel comfortable, and have him or her help you.
第 II卷(共35分)
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:
如无错误,在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉,在该行右边的横线上写出该词,并也用斜线画掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出加的词。
此行错一个词:在错词处划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Many people eat too many and that's not good 76. __________
for their health. In poor country many people 77. __________
can't get enough food and this too damage their 78. __________
healthes. Many students have a poor diet too 79. __________
because they're poor and because they're lazy. 80. __________
I think that that's difficult to plan a good diet 81. __________
these days because it's hard to judge value of 82. __________
frozen and tinned foods(罐头食品). These are 83. __________
wide used because they're so easy to prepare 84. __________
for, but I think we need fresh food, too. 85. __________