请修改以下短文：文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一条横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Joe,
I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National
Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea.
On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating
others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, be
a volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to your
future work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best to
be a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Jane
改错（满分10分）
Dear sir,
I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but finally I
failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot
weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself someone who
couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company that was
advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted to make a move, and I was always
disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.
Yours
Li Ming
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
I was glad to accept your letter of June 22． 76． ____
I don’t expect that you would answer my letter so 77．
soon．You suggested in letter that I read more, to 78．
which I agree．That is true that one should read 79．
much to improve his reading．It is the same like 80．
swimming．One can’t learn to swim if he goes and 81．
swim in the water．So this summer vacation I am 82．
going to get down to read some books．Although 83．
I am not the kind of person always does things 84．
according to his plan, but I will try my best． 85．
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At 7:30 on the morning, we gathered at the school gate and set off on a large bus．An hour later, we arrive at the Forest Park．Getting off, we started our journey at once.
First, we climbed the green hills and on the way tried their luck to hunt for hidden treasure．Next, we toured around the lake in the comfortable boat．The beautiful scenery was really a feast for the eye．Then at noon time, we landed and settled at an open area, which we enjoyed a wonderful picnic．After eating, we sang and danced happy and played some interesting games．The day passed quickly．Finally it was time for us to return back．So at 3:00 pm, we cleaned the ground, made our way to the parking lot, getting on the bus and left.
It was really an exciting trip since we had long busy with our school work.
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断;如无错误,在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。原行没有错的不要改。
As we know, our country suffer heavy snow last 76. _________
Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavily 77. _________
snow, that made the buses, trains and planes stop. 78. _________
Million of people couldn't go home. Many people 79. _________
suffered trouble. There were no food, water or light in 80. _________
some places. Our government called on people to fight 81. _________
against the heavy snow. As a student, I think they should 82. _________
learn from that the heroes. We must study hard at school. 83. _________
We should learn all kinds knowledge to make our 84. _________
motherland strong, better and richer. 85. _________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Johnny,
Thank you for speaking to our class last Thursday.We’ve all learned a lot about how you make your weather 76.________forecast. After you left, we made a list what we had 77. ________learned. Then we set up the small weather station outside 78. ________your classroom. From tomorrow on, one student in the class 79. ________will be the weather forecaster every day. He and she will 80. ________record data in our weather book. During a few months, 81. ________we will start drawing graphs and charts what show our 82. ________weather patterns here in Nebraska. Which you can see, 83. ________your visit has been given us a lot of ideas. Thank you so 84. ________much for opening our eyes to this interested subject. 85. ________