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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grasses and trees everywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day. We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

第四部分: 写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grasses and trees everywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day. We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
The main purpose of newspapers are to provide__________
news. If you examine newspapers closely, you find that__________
there are all sort of news: accidents, floods, fires, wars,__________
sports, books, etc. The news cover everything that happens__________
to people and their surroundings. Sometimes there are__________
news items which are very interested. __________
A news report is usually very short, except for when it__________
was very important, but it has a lot of information. It__________
is also writing in short paragraphs. The first paragraph__________
is in the fact a summary of the news items. It gives all_________
the necessary information, what, when, where, how, and why. The other paragraphs give
full details of the subject.

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第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多的词用斜线（\^*）划掉，在该行写出该词，也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧^*），在该行写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A boy and his father were having walk in the 76. __________
country when it suddenly began to rain very hardly. 77. __________
They do not have their umbrellas with them, and there 78. __________
had nowhere to hide themselves from the rain, so 79. __________
he soon got wet. While they were walking home through 80. __________
the rain, the boy was thinking for a long time. Then at 81. __________
last he turned to his father and said to him, “Why did82. __________
it rain, father? It isn’t nice, isn’t it?” “No, it isn’t very 83. __________
nice, but it’s much useful, Tom!” answered his father. 84. __________
“It rains to make the fruits and the vegetables to grow for us.”85. __________

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第二节：短文改错（共10 小题，每小题1.5 分；满分15 分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ \）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并且也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
注意：原行没有错的不要改！
It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street . 76．___________
I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road 77．___________
Shortly after that I hear a scream behind .I looked back to 78．___________
see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell 79．___________
down and the banana peel was exactly under his left shoe 80．___________
She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel 81．___________
and ran toward the dustbin .
On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went to 82．___________
apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me . 83．___________
The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action . 84．___________
And now, after I do everything , I'll think carefully whether 85．___________
it's right or wrong . I'll do my best to be in good habits and qualities.