Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost . I need your help .
Best wishes ,
Li Ping
Mother and son have the equal gray eyes.
Except a few spelling mistakes, your composition is good.
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧);在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;该行错一个词,在错的词下划一个横线;在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
An old man went to the hospital for something was trouble 76.________
with his lungs. Come to see him, the doctor said, “Well, 77.________
Mr John, you are going to have an injections(注射), 78.________
and then you’ll probably feel very better. ”In the evening, 79.________
a young nurse came to Mr John’s bed and said gently80.________
to him, “I’m going to give you first injection now, Mr 81.________
John. When do you want it?”The old patient seemed puzzled. 82.________
He saw at the nurse for several seconds, and then said, 83.________
“Nobody has ever let me to choose that before. Are you really 84.________
going to let me choose now? No, Mr John, ” replied she, “Where85.________
do you want your injection? Well, then, ” Mr John answered with
a smile, “I want it in YOUR arm, please.”
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧);在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;该行错一个词,在错的词下划一个横线;在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
In my hometown there used to be a temple with a 76.________
history of over eight hundred years. It lies in a 77.________
valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful 78.________
and famous that many tourists came visit it every 79.________
day. They took photo; they wrote down their names on 80.________
the walls, they were brought food and drink and left rubbish 81.________
everywhere. One day some toursts did a fire to cook 82.________
food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind 83.________
blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly 84.________
temple was burned out and only a little walls remained. 85.________
The beautiful temple disappeared.
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧);在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;该行错一个词,在错的词下划一个横线;在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
The train which I am traveling on was already half an hour 76.________
late.I had to reach to Vienna at 7∶15 in order to catch 77.________
the 7∶25 train to Paris— but that was impossible now. 78.________
I explained the situation to the conductor, which advised 79.________
me to get off two stops after Vienna station and take 80.________
a taxi. While the time came, he even helped me with my 81.________
bags. He hoped me good luck as I jumped off, and a few 82.________
minutes later, I was going to the direction of the city in a 83.________
taxi. It was exactly 7∶20 the taxi stopped outside the 84.________
station. I paid the driver quickly, seizing my bags and 85.________
hurried inside.