英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is reported, some needy students receive financial support of some kind people but never express our thanks.Personally, I think they are wrong.
Though the helpers didn’t expect any reward in return, but it’s necessary and good manner to say “thank you”.Besides, it is a basic social skill express ourselves in modern society.Maybe some of them do feel thankfully.It is only because they are afraid of being looked down upon which they remain silent.But I just want to say that being poor for a moment doesn’t mean you will be poor forever.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to
pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in
and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way
they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because
they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school
students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of
course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My classmate Liu Hui looks tired this week. This morning, I asked him if he had trouble in fall asleep. He said no and explained how he looked tired. “I want to do well on my studies, so I have been stayed up these days,” he said. Hearing that, I became worrying. “Staying up may not help you at all. If you want to study well, you should have had a good sleep every night,” I said. Though he disagreed with me. He believed that if he studied for two more hour every night, he would catch up others. I said nothing more but I’m sure he will realize what I told them is true one day.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加,删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is my father’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, I went to a shop and choose a present for him. After that, I went home by the train. On the way, I was imagining how happily my father would be when he accepted the present. The train got to the next stop before I knew it. An old lady got the train. Every seat was taken, but she had to stand with two heavy bags in both of her hand.
After an immediate hesitation(犹豫), I gave my seat to her and he was grateful for all what I did.
In my opinion, give others a hand whenever they are in trouble not only brings happiness to the ones who receive it but also to the ones who give it.
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If you walk around in some public place, you will notice most of smokers are young people and some are still middle school students. It is said that in China the number of people smoking are about 45%. Why do so many people smoke? Some think smoking gives themselves pleasure. Some even think that smoking can refresh them. In the fact, smoking is a bad habit that makes great harm to people’s health. Studies of smoking show that many kinds of diseases have anything to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waste, that costs one much money. Besides, many fires are often causing by careless smokers. Today more and more people all over the world want to give up smoking.
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Though great progress have been made in science these years, there are still many people live in poor conditions. They make their lives by collecting or selling used things. Their children cannot go to school because they had not enough money to send their children there. How do you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion﹙人口大爆炸﹚. A president of a developing country once said, “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.” Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.