假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ù),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday are coming, that makes me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knock down by a truck or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面加上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went shopping with my wife. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Amy,
I glad to discuss your present situation with you. People often miss parents for the first time they left home. However, most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment. You cannot live with our parents forever. You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability. You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you. Maybe you will still miss your parents, and your new friends will bring joy to your new life. Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities. You will get much pleasure.
Faithfully yours
Sharon
Dear Mr. Smith,Thank you for your kind letter inviting me go andstay several days with you. But I'm terrible sorry to saythat I can't go this summer vacation, for I promisedto go and spend the holidays with my grandma, who live in the countryside.I'd like to tell you that I get on well with my study.And I must own the success in my English for yourhelp.At present I'm busy all day prepare for theexaminations and I feel sure I'll success.I do hope we can meet with each other soon.With best regard to you and Tom. Sincerely yours Jack
下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改8处,多者(从第9处起)不计分。
Dear Kang Li,
I haven’t heard you for a long time. How are you? I have just finish the exams. Now I’m glad that I have time to write to you. Our teacher tells us that China is a big country that have the largest population in the world. It’s on the other sides of the world. Now the sun is shining bright here, and perhaps you’re sleeping in the dark night. I want to know anything more about the Chinese way of living. I wonder that if you can tell me about it in your letter. Please write soon.
Yours,
John
文中共有l0处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(入),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribe .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that what I could change my clothes at last.