假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

第Ⅱ卷（共40分）
第三部分：写作
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.

第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边
In England boys and girls usually have two months to 76. ______________
rest after the final exams. Not only the riches but also factory 77. ______________
workers or bus drivers can take our children to the seaside for 78. ______________
their holidays. Why children like spending their summer 79. ______________
holidays on the seaside? It is why they like the sand, the sun, 80. ______________
the cool wind and the salt water here more than anything else. 81. ______________
Of course, there were lots of new things to see, nice things to 82. ______________
eat, and the exciting things to do , but it is the feelings of sand 83. ______________
under one’s feet, of cool wind and salt water on one’s skin, of 84. ______________
the warm sun on one’s back that makes the seaside what it is. 85. ______________

第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
When I was little, my mom once took me to America 76. ______________
to visit one of our relative. At that time I couldn’t speak 77. ______________
a word of English, but I was deep impressed by the 78. ______________
teenagers here. Their skin was bright like sunshine， 79. ______________
their eyes were blue but they always looked happy． 80. ______________
How time flies! I’m teenager myself now．A friend of 81. ______________
mine in Los Angeles often tells me he attends to various 82. ______________
clubs, plans for his future and never had a formal 83. ______________
exam in his school so far．All the students enjoy them at 84. ______________
school. That’s what I know about America teenagers． 85. ______________

第四部分：写作（共三节）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76. _________
us English when I attended training class two 77. _________
years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. _________
for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. _________
her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. _________
especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. _________
to write English letters and reports correct. 82. _________
I still remember how she helped me for my 83. _________
English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm going to 84. _________
send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85. _________

六、短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 71 ______
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 72 ______
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 73 ______
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 74 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 75 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 76 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 77 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 78 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 79 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 80 ________