假定英语课老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的一下作文。文中共有10出语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词出加以个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
As the high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance to practise the language. I seize every chance talk with them. However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say, and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick..
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother and I stay at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visited Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, and it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. That I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to my friends who is going to Beijing.
短文改错（每小题1.5分，共15分）
下文中共有10处错误。在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
写作（共两节，满分35分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack of self-confidence．You should smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate，and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
短文改错（满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was
born in July 15, 1974, in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986.
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and
chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he
entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four year of hard work
there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his
excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is
now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I
will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing had happened until the class is over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmate. As the result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong. We can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along with each other happy and peacefully.