假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Of all my teachers, Mr. Smith is one who impresses me most. Although he is 40 and ordinary, but he looks very young. And he is one of the most popular teacher in our school. Compared with other teachers, he paid more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways make his classes interesting. In her opinion, we should not only know “what” but also understanding “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediate, he encourages us to think by ourselves when he puts forward
questions. Under his help, we have learned how to analyze and settle problems. How a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to!
第二部分、短文改错（共1题；每空1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线(__)，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改！
I went to the English Camp in London last summer
holiday. One day， my two good friends and I were on duties. 81. ________
When we finished cleaning classroom, it was about 8:50 82.________
in the evening. Then we prepare to go to students' dorm. 83.________
Inside the building， it was very dark. There was only the 84.________
moon and some small stars in the sky. In that moment， 85 ________
we were all afraid. On our way to the dorm, one of my 86. ________
friends saw something on the ground and picked it up, said 87. ________
"Look, 100 pounds!" When we got to our dorm, we gave them 88. ________
to the teacher. Money is important, but money is not anything 89. ________
and cannot buy all what we need in the world. 90. ________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个“√”如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International 86.
Camp for children. I have been told one more worker 87.
will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How 88.
about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill 89.
close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear 90.
birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in 91.
tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five 92.
hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 93.
area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable94.
experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 95.
Yours
Jimmy
阅读理解第二节答案请写在二卷规定的地方。
第Ⅱ卷（共50分）
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
My classmate ,Joseph ,is at present in hospital
with a breaking leg .He was walking to school the other 66.
day when he let a bicycle ran right into him .He never 67.
watches where he is going ,so he often gets into the trouble. 68.
But he is having a nice time there .He has a comfortable69.
room, patiently nurses , and a great deal of time to read .70.
Some friends of his go to see him every day , they take him71.
lost of good book and fresth fruit .He is not losing any time 72.
from school because he is busy study what he has 73.
missed in classs .The doctor says he is recovering fast than 74.
expected and will be out of hospital a few weeks . 75.
改错（满分10分）
I sometimes argue with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She holds the
view which Senior students have to devote all their time to work hard at their lessons. It
seems to me that once I allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control me and forget all about
my study .She also thinks it is bad for my eye. Actually I quite understand her, but I really
couldn’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard
work .Besides, it is important for us to know what have happened at home and at abroad.
Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
第二节．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city 76______
to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It is set up in 77______
the early 1990s, but it has been developing rapid. From 78______
here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air and 79_______
by land. Recently a new freeway is connected 80______
with Beijing has been used. The place around our city 81______
are rich in natural resources. And they have enough supplies 82______
of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order 83______
is very well. Besides, the people of our city are warm-hearted 84_______
and we like to make friends by people all over the world. 85______
That’s all. Thank you.