I spent most of my summer holidays travel in London. I arrived there in middle of July. After reaching my sister’s apartment I got many sleep. The next day I went to St Paul’s Cathedral, an amazing monument, that was well worth a visit. After take some photos in front of it, I moved on to the Tate Modern art gallery. There is an excellent exhibition of oil paintings and sculptures by some famous British artist. For dinner we went to the Ivy, a very beautifully restaurant. The food was good but the atmosphere was nice. It was a great day of sightseeing and one that would never be forgotten it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处错
误,每句中最多有2处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不算分.
Mrs. Black was having a lot of trouble with her skin, so she went to see her doctor and had some test. The next day her doctor telephoned her to give her the list of things she should not eat. Mrs. Black careful wrote all the things down a piece of paper, and then she left it beside the telephone when she went out to a friends meeting. When she got back home two hours late, she found her husband waiting for her. Carried a big basket full of food, she said, “Hello, dear. I've done all your shopping for you.” “Done all my shopping？” she asked in surprise, “but why did you know what I wanted？”“Well, when I got home, I found your shopping list beside the telephone，” answered her husband. “So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down.”
以下十个句子中，每句有一处错误，请找出并改正。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。Don’t make any voice, Your father is sleeping
This morning I got up very lately.
The old man looks very health.
You do say that you would lend me some money yesterday.
My father asked Tom and I to help.
You can do it this way, if you dare to do.
Your watch is similar with mine.
Is this the restaurant in where you work?
Either Bob or I are to blame
The teacher asked me not do it again.
With the popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because its advantages. Online shopping can cost us a lot of valuable time. What’s more , there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from , which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenience to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisement on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes the customers are easily cheated.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoyed the convenience of online shopping.
Jim is one of my closely friends. Two months ago, his mother bought a computer to him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computers scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.
英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. So is my grandmother, a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.