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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18^th century, people
thought they were harm. So the king of Sweden decided to find out that this was true
or not. It was happened that there were two brothers were in prison at the time. The
king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and other coffee. Both of them have
lived many years without any problem. At last the one who had to drink tea died on the
age of 83 and the other lived even long. Because of this, Sweden is today one of the
country where tea and coffee are drunk.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。先对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：⑴原行没有错的不要改；

⑵答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

Dear Editor,

1．	I'm writing to tell you opinion about water saving.

2．	Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live

3．	without water and neither agriculture or industry can go

4．	without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.

5．	Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.

6．	To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all

7．	out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no

8．	drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find

9．	ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath

10．	water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. Sincerely, Li Hua

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜
线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Every one of us can make a great efforts to
cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all
of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only
when we have a real need. That won't be easy, I know，
but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to
work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy
smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our
everyday use of water and electric at home. For example,
how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the
lights or television when no one else was there?

下面短文有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）.并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词，把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词，在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very
_________
much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of
_________
the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I
_________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories
_________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant
_________
view there. You told me the name of different plants and their
_________
characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology
_________
and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now
________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study
________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since
________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours,
Daisy