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2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help .
Best wishes,
Li Ping
Anne lives in a small town.She is fond of
surfing the Internet.In general speaking,she 1.
spent about an hour a day on line.To her,it is 2.
a wonderful place because you never know that 3.
it may have in store for you.Last Friday,she 4.
found an e-pal,that called himself “Future”. 5.
They promised to keep touch with each other. 6.
And she was warned against him by her parents. 7.
“What will it lead to?” she asked.“A happy ending,” 8.
Anne answered and continued typing,paid no 9.
attention to them.One month past,and a man 10.
called “Future” was arrested by the police!
“CATS”,the greatest musical in the world,went to Beijing at last! 1.
As a big fan of the show,I bought a ticket quite early and looking forward 2.
to it for weeks.It was going to be the happiest day of my life,and there 3.
was other performance I had not expected.My mum and I arrived at the 4.
Great Hall of the People ahead of the time,and found our seats on the 5.
second floor.The good designed stage,a huge rubbish dump for cats, 6.
caught the attention the moment I sat down.The show was about to begin 7.
and I was expecting a brilliant musical.So it was said that all the tickets had 8.
sold out long ago,to my surprise nearly a third of the seats were still empty . 9.
But as soon as the music began,its magical power brought my eyes back 10.
to the stage.
The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher 1.
talked to me.She said that she and my schoolmate all 2.
wished me success,but it didn’t matter that I would 3.
win or not.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so 4.
nervous as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people 5.
present.Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in 6.
the crowd.She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered 7.
her words and calmdown.I did a good job and won the first 8.
prize.Now my picture and theprize is hanging in the library. 9.
Whenever I see them I will often think ofmy English teacher. 10.
“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying.It tells us that it 1.
does not any matter if we are slow at doing something.As 2.
long as we keep on trying and practice,well do a good job 3.
in the end.The saying is especial useful in English study. 4.
Since a student is poor at speaking,he should grasp every 5.
chance to open mouth and speak English.His oral English 6.
may be excellent one day due to his hard works.Not only is 7.
the saying useful in English study,it is also helpful in our 8.
daily life.To an extent,it is no short cut in doing everything 9.
since key to success lies in “Practice makes perfect”. 10.
Nuli told us what he wanted to be a scientist when he 1.
was in his childhood.He worked hard at all his lesson 2.
and tried to enter into a famous university in China, 3.
but he failed because the Cultural Revolution,which 4.
forced him to make a living at the age of 16.He serves 5.
as a farmer then a worker,but he spent his spare 6.
time studied and was finally admitted into a local college. 7.
He often says,“Young guys,do not lose the heart 8.
when you are in trouble.Believe in yourself forever, 9.
so you will surely make great progress sooner or later.” 10.