假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(一),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father go fishing alone every Sunday. This morning when we were got up , it was fine. Father decided to go fishing, so mother stopped him,said that it was going to rain according to the weather forecast. She asked him to put off his raincoat, but he did not take her advices. When he got to the river, it was cloud. Soon the rain began to fall heavily and he was caught in it. After she got home , he was wet through. “Did you catch some fish?” asked my mother. “No, but I caught bad cold,” he answered.
Although the first computer was only introduced
to China in the mid-1950s, since then ,a number of computers 1._____
used in different fields has been grown rapidly. 2.______
Computers are now affected millions of people in countless ways 3.______
every day. They are used to predict the weather, examine the 4.______
ocean,and to develop defence systems. They depend more and more 5._____
heavy on computers. There is no reason to think that their use 6._____
will decrease.By the contrary ,they will develop more rapidly 7. ______
as you think.If you are among those who still don't know much 8.______
about computers, you will lost in the future.
9.______
You should learn what you can while you still have the chance
10.______
The others day, on his way back from school, Li Ming 1._____
found a strange-looked toy car lying on the grass. 2._____
Curiously, he picked it out and played with it. To his 3.______
great surprising, suddenly ,the toy became larger and larger . 4.______
Finally it changed into a real car .A moment Li Ming 5.______
got into the car ,from a speaker above coming a stranger’s 6._____
voice: “Please input your address on the screen in front of 7._____
you, and fastened your seat belt. You will go wherever 8._____
you like ”. As a boy full of adventures, Li Ming decided to 9._____
take a risk and try on this magic car …. 10.____
We have done a survey recently to find whom students will turn to 1.______
when they in trouble .The following are the results . 2.______
Most of students will go to their friends ,because 3.______
they are almost the same age and are able to 4.______
understand each other easy .Some students will tell 5.______
their parents or teachers about their troubles for the reason that they all 6.____
have too much experience that they can be trusted 7.___
by their kids and students. Only a few students 8______
prefer to solving the problemsall by themselves .They hate to talk with others 9______
and can’t get on well with others .As a result ,they have more friends . 10._____
Should students make friends on line?some people think the Internet help make 1.______
many friends .Chatting online ,students can express his feelings 2.______
and opinions more freely ,and even get help at their foreign 3.______
language studies Others ,therefore ,think students should not . 4.______
They say making friends online is waste of time , 5.______
which should be spent more meaningfully on study . 6.______
Besides ,some students get cheat on line . 7.______
It is my opinion whether students should place their study,8.______
health and safe before other things . 9.______
After all ,we can find friend in our classmates.. 10.______
Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______
of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______
than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3.______
the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______
take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______
Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______
only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______
my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______
studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______
will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10._____