假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改；在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意； 1.每处错误及及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
It was at five o’ clock yesterday afternoon which I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of who kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tried to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son goes on crying. After what seemed a long time, a man seating next to the mother said angry, “ I can’t stand it anymore. Why don’t you give him what he wants?” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could. But what she wants is your cap.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.
When I first learned to write in English, I ran into many 76. ________
difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought 77. ________
in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 78. ________
My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her 79. ________
advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 80. ________
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was 81. ________
learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote 82. ________
a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it 83. ________
very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was 84. ________
a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85. ________
The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher 86. _________
talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 87. _________
wished me success, but it didn't matter that I would 88. _________
win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so 89. _________
nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people 90. _________
present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in 91. _________
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered 92. _________
her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first 93. _________
prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 94. _________
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 95. _________
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of 76. ________
our school football team. We practise for three times 77. ________
every week and often watch football match on TV 78. ________
together. Play football not only makes us grow up 79. ________
tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play 80. ________
and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 81. ________
for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches 82. ________
us the important of obedience. Each player must 83. ________
obey captain, who is the leader of the team. 84. ________
And they must not break the rules too often if we 85. ________
want to win the game.
Decorate the Christmas tree is usually a family event. For many families,
1. ________
it starts with choosing a tree from either a farm and a store. Then the tree
2. ________
is brought at home and put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up 3. ________
straight. Then everyone helps to hang balls and light. After the tree is 4. ________
decorated, a Christmas tree skirt rapped around the bottom of the tree.
5. ________
Sometime, people make all of the decorations for the tree by themselves.
6. ________
Many people collect Christmas trees decorations throughout their lifetime,
7. ________
adding a new decoration each year. Beside lights and balls, people may 8. ________
also put flowers, pine cones, strings of pop corn and garlands (花环) on the
9. ________
tree, There are as much different ways to decorate a tree as there are people!
10. ________
I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________
my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2. ________
explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3. ________
near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4. ________
unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5. ________
see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes6. ________
became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7. ________
water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear.8. ________
The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9. ________
a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened.10. ________