下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward, at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.
第二节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
That afternoon we didn’t go out, we didn’t take a walk as usually. 76. ________
We stayed at home because of the weather was rainy, windy and cold. 77. ________
We sat in the living room. My aunt had her child around her. 78. ________
Mary, Tom and John sat near their mother, that was resting on 79. ________
a couch. I sat alone. They don’t want me near them. My aunt had 80. ________
never liked me. She let me live with her, but she was always 81. ________
unkind to me. Her children—my cousins—were cruel for me. 82. ________
I was a poor orphan, only ten years old. I had friends. Nobody 83. ________
wanted me. I went into the next room. Here there was a bookcase
full of interested books. I chose a book that was full of pictures. 84. ________
I began to read. Read made me forget all my troubles. 85. ________
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My best friend Li Hua gives me a call this morning. 71.
She said it was her birthday and she would have a 72.
birthday party. I promised that I would go. But I went 73.
shopping this afternoon and bought a doll as his 74.
birthday present. I arrived her home at six o’clock75.
on the evening. Many of her friends had already arrived.76.
On the table was a big beautiful cake with 14 candle lit. 77.
Li Hua made wish and blew off all the candles. We all 78.
shouted with greatly joy. However, I didn’t see her parents. 79.
We had a great time, but I think it would be more better if 80.
we celebrate our birthdays with our parents.
第II卷(共35分)
第四部分: 写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear Kate,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 76. ________
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77. ________
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. ________
leaving things lying around the house while he did this 79. ________
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to80. ________
follow. But he often says, “Doing as I say, not as I do.” 81. ________
Even worse, he point out my past mistakes to guests,82. ________
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _______
bear what he does. I have been tried many times84. ________
to to talk with he but he never listens. Please help me.85. ________
Yours,
Jane
第II卷（非选择题，共35分）
第一部分短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
短文改错:
Han Han, a professionally rally(赛车) driver, best-selling author 1__________
and the China's most popular blogger, has been chosen as one 2__________
of “the 100 most influential people” by Time magazine. 3__________
Every year, Time selects hundreds of people included the leaders, artists 4__________
and icons, and encouraged its readers to vote. The weekly news 5__________
magazine, introduced Han as an author and a race car driver, 6__________
said Han was qualified to be on the list as good as Obama and Lady Gaga. 7__________
Han's first novel, that based on his experience as a high 8__________
school dropout, became a best seller in China and caused
a debate the quality of the country's education system. Han had 9__________
received much higher votes than any other candidates (候选人). 10__________
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起) 不计分。
Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the late afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts.