英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌-优题课

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。务必按照以下要求的格式修改，否则不得分。
增加：在缺词处加一个下漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用从左上向右下的斜线（\）划掉即可。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_____），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was
taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One
day he and his friends were practice shooting, and all of them were doing quite well
besides Peter. After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit him once, the
officer who was trying to teach the young soldiers shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless.
Peter! Don’t waste your last bullet，too! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!”
Peter felt shameful. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds later the officer and
the other young soldier heard the sound of a shot.
“Heavens!” the officer said, “Has that silly man really shot himself?”
He ran behind the wall anxiously, but Peter is all right. “I'm sorry, sir.” he said, “and
I missed again.”

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
How a great party! I seldom go to parties because it’s such a problem to me to remember people names. I’m so glad I’ve read that book about improving your memory. The author suggest do exercises, and they really help. I don’t worry about what people would think me any more, and I try to pay attention to that people are saying. As result, I have a great time! I’m even planning to go on dancing with my friends. I will have an English test tomorrow, so I could stop writing now and start studying.

The village was always very quiet.The people lived there.
were busy working in their fields during the day ,and
went to bed early at night,tiring after a long day’s hard
work.All of them had lived in a village for all their
life and have never left for more than one day at a time.
On these days they left,they got up early in the morning.
They filled their carts with fruit and vegetables and sheeps,
and went on the market in the town beyond their valley.
They came back in the evening and with some money and perhaps a
present for their children.That was their left-hard yet
simple,but not unhappy.

During this summer vacation，I went to the country to _________
see my uncle．We haven’t seen each other for a long time
I was very glad to see that he was living happy life and
that great changes had been taken place in his home．He had
worked there for more than twenty years，and he looks very
strong．I went to work in the fields with uncle and his
workers every day．Though I was a bit tiring．I felt very happy.
That I liked most was to watch the sunrise there and
swimming in the small river．At the end of the vacation,I
had to say goodbye for my uncle and left the beautiful village

One afternoon,when I was on my way home, the sky
changed suddenly.Dark cloud were gathering. I began
to feel worrying because I didn’t have either a raincoat
or umbrella.It soon started to rain heavily
Just as I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling
me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that
it was Jasime,a good neighbor of my,He immediately
offrerd to share his umbrella with me.We walked all
the way home.With Jasime’s help,I would have got
wet to the skin. How much thankful I was for his help!