假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We middle school students have had many tests or exam. We have achieved success and suffer failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure. Some is in low spirits when they don’t do well in the exams. They usually lose their heart and no longer study so harder as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be confidently. They try to find out but analyze the causes so that they will no longer make same mistakes. I agree with those which have active attitudes. As we are all know, failure is the mother of success.
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10分，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一个行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画—个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
Last week, when I was taking train in Manchester, I saw a 76._______
scene it astonished me. On the platform I noticed a womanin 77.__ _
worn clothes walking slowly. Suddenly, he fell totheground. 78._______
There I see other people just keep walking asif79._______
something happened. For a moment the woman’s eyes were 80._______
full of hopelessness. Then she struggled to her foot and got on 81._______
a train. I just wondered why others didn’t try to help with this 82._______
woman. Later I talked about this event to my friend, wholooked 83._______
at me and said, “What else did you do at that time? Just looking?” 84._______
I looked at him in silence. I realized I was just so selfish as others85._______
on the scene, too.
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 81________________
hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 82. ________________
me. Some fishermen are unlucky, instead catching fish, 83. ________________
they catch old boots or rubbish. But I’m even less luck. I 84________________
never catch everything—even old boots after 85. ________________
spend a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 86. ________________
with empty bag. “You should give up fishing,” my friends 87. ________________
say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one88. ________________
important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m89 ________________
only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 90. ________________
第二卷
写作(共两节，，满分35分)
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For76. _________ example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 77. _________in a secret place that I couldn’t find. Then he 78. _________ ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 79. _________ He said he is busy. That is, a game of 80. _________ tennis making him very busy. He did not care81. _________ if something he did makes people angry. For82. _________instance, on one night he played strong and 83. _________ loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 84. _________he is difference now. He often helps grandma with 85. _________housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分20分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，满分5分）
| In order to go diving, you need some equipments. First divers carry their backs a metal bottle, which is filled of water. There’s enough air in it to last about 40 minutes. Next, divers carry heavy metal weights in a belt around its bodies. With these heavy weights they would float to the surface. You see, there are a lot of air in their air bottles, and this will bring them up to the surface if they didn’t have any more weights. Mostly divers don’t go very deep. |
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改错
Bob told me that he would like to be lawyer when he was at school. He had worked very hard at his lessons and tried to enter into a famous university, but something unhappily happened to his family, that made it necessary for him work for a living. As a young man, he had been a bus-driver, a dust-man or a salesman. But he spent his spare times studying and finally become a college teacher. “Young people,” he often said, “full of wishes and hopes after they step into society.”