(届陕西省西工大附中高三第六次模拟英语试卷)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.
Best regards,
Janet
Decorate the Christmas tree is usually a family event. For many families,
1. ________
it starts with choosing a tree from either a farm and a store. Then the tree
2. ________
is brought at home and put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up 3. ________
straight. Then everyone helps to hang balls and light. After the tree is 4. ________
decorated, a Christmas tree skirt rapped around the bottom of the tree.
5. ________
Sometime, people make all of the decorations for the tree by themselves.
6. ________
Many people collect Christmas trees decorations throughout their lifetime,
7. ________
adding a new decoration each year. Beside lights and balls, people may 8. ________
also put flowers, pine cones, strings of pop corn and garlands (花环) on the
9. ________
tree, There are as much different ways to decorate a tree as there are people!
10. ________
I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________
my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2. ________
explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3. ________
near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4. ________
unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5. ________
see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes6. ________
became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7. ________
water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear.8. ________
The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9. ________
a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened.10. ________
Between Virginia and Maryland on the Potomac River lie 1. ________
Washington D.C. It is about 220 miles in the south 2. ________
of New York City. The pleasantest and easiest ways to 3. ________
get there is by long-distance bus, or by the fast
(125-mile-an-hour) train which spends a little more money than 4. ________
the bus journey and a little less money than flying. I could travel far
more than 220 miles to see Washington. It’s not city that has 5. ________
been grown up accidently as most big cities have done. 6. ________
It was carefully planned for the nation’s capital by a 7. ________
Frenchman, Perril Enfant. The city was named 8. ________
George Washington, the much-loved, much-admired,
much-respected first president of the United States. 9. ________
In 1791 he himself arranged to buy the land which it stands. 10. ________
Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit 1.________
to a American family. They live in a small 2 _________
town. It was very kind for them to meet me 3.__________
at the railway station and drove me to their home 4.__________
The Smiths did his best to make me feel 5.__________
at home. They offered me coffee and other 6.__________
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing 7.__________
together. They eager to know everything about 8.__________
China and asked me lots of question. In fact, 9 .__________
they are planning to visit China in next year. 10.__________
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 1.________
Miss Fang. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to 2._________
know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. 3.________
My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4 .________
capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We 5._________
study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, 6._________
English and physics.1 use to play ping-pong a lot 7._________
in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. 8._________
Do you play any ball games? What your favourite 9 _________
sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. 10._________
Yours
Li Hua