假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost but she couldn’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. I felt very happy and thought we really did the good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.
第五部分：改错写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断,每一行均有一个错误,请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
第一节短文改错
What you give is always equal with what you get. 1.______
A few days ago, I went to an interview. In the 2.______
preparation, I cost a week looking through the news. 3.______
I passed the interview easily, that helped me to 4.______
understand that put in the effort reaps(收获) rewards. 5.______
The opposite point holds either: It is often a 6.______
student’s laziness, for example, which leads 7.______
to his or her failures in an exam. A driver’s 8._____
carelessness causes the accident. The environmental
lesson we should learn is that we do not stop 9.______
damaging the atmosphere, the planet will suffer from. 10.______
某市的中学的学生到我们的学校参观，希望了解我校学生的课外活动，请根据下面表中的内容用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍我们的校学生的课外活动情况。
课外活动时间每天下午活动内容最喜欢的项目希望与建议
3：20－
5：20 跳舞、阅读、体育、唱歌、微机、学科小组体育、微机、增加活动时间，多组织参观、旅游活动
词数：100字。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school.
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
(注意：在试题卷上作答无效)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用
斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Besides Egyptians, people of Mexico also builded 76.__________
pyramids. They didn’t build the pyramids for tombs. They 77.__________
were used to build a pyramid and then build a temple on 78.___________
top of them. The pyramids of Mexico are not as high as 79.___________
that of Egypt, but they are bigger. Each pyramid has a wide 80.___________
stairway that go from the bottom to the top. 81.__________
The biggest pyramid in Mexico is alm
ost 2000 year old. 82.__________
Scientists think it spent 10,000 men more than ten years 83.___________
to build. On top of it they built a temple to worship 84.___________
the sun. The temple is no longer there and people call 85.___________
pyramid of the sun.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
One day two young men was walking in 76.___________
the forest while they saw a bear ahead . They 77.____________
tried run away. One of them got up into a 78.____________
tree, other was fat and could not climb up . 79.____________
But he threw himself at the foot of the tree. 80.____________
Soon the bear came nearly. It saw the fat 81.____________
man .The man held his breathe . The bear thought 82.________
____
he was died, so it went away.The man in the
七、Error correction(短文改错)10分
Mr.Smith was a biology professor,but he had 1._________
a lot of animal bones that he was very proud.Then 2._________
one year he managed to get a better job in others 3._________
university.As he was busy at the work,his wife asked 4._________
three men to remove all their things to the new house. 5._________
One of them was just about throw a large box into the 6._________
truck with all the other things,then Mrs.Smith ran 7._________
out and said,“Please treat the box gentle! It has 8._________
all of my husband's bones in it.” Heard this,the 9._________
man was so surprising that he nearly dropped it on his feet.10._________