英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Jack London was a famous America writer. He was born in January 12th, 1876, in San Francisco. His family was very poor, so Jack had to leave for school to make money. He worked hard in much difficult jobs. Later Jack returned school, b ut he didn't stay. He wrote, “Life and pocket book were all too short.” In 1887, he went to Alaska to find out gold. He returned home and started to write. His writings were successfully, and he became rich and famous. Jack was no a happy man, however. In poor health, he took off her own life in 1926.
We're now living in an information 4ge, m that TV, cell________
phones and the Web are wide used．It seems that many people________
cannot enjoy them without them．However, if I had to give_______
up one of them, I will turn off the TV ratter than switch off________
my ceil phone and cut off the Internet．I could do without TV_______
because few show take my fancy and there're too many commercials．_______
Besides, most programs on the TV are also available elsewhere．_______
As for cell phones and the Web, they are more necessary to me．_______
I need a cell phone to keep touch with m> friends and family, and________
almost all information can be gather on the Internet．_______
短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，满分15分）
The village was always very quietly .The people living______
there were busy about working in their fields during the______
day and went to bed early at night, tiring after a ______
long day ’s hard work. All of them had lived in a __
village for all their life and had never left for less than ______
one day at a time. On these days how they left, they got___
up early in the morning .They filled with their cart of _____
fruit ,vegetables and sheeps, and went to the_______
market in the town beyond their valley .They come _______
back in the evening with some money and perhaps a ____
present for their children. That was their life－hard and
simple, but not unhappy
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American．I became their guide．First, we went to the Shouxi River．They wanted to look around the river by the boat．After buy the tickets, we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that, we went shopping．The sellers couldn't spoke English．Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences．They bought some little things with their help．Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures．When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch．After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history．www．
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ＾), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to
catch it, big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
短文改错
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the
ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I
was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.
Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him，but I had no
luck.Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions.Worse still，I had no money，so
I had to walk home，covered as much as 5 kilometers.