假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Grandpa,
How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child; you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours
Daisy
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer holiday, I go to Dalian with my parents. We traveled there on
air. Dalian is a very beautiful and modern city. In morning, we arrived at the hotel.
After breakfast, we began us tour. First, we took a bus to Sea Park. There were such
many different kinds of fish that I couldn’t believe my eye. Then we had lunch in a
restaurant. The seafood, which is well-known, was delicious. After lunch we went
swim. During this trip, we also went to another places of interest. Several days later,
we left for Dalian. We felt very happily. This was the reason why we didn’t feel tired.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am ![]() on evening. |
Looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered by water. However, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. But it is true. You see, 97% of the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. So only 3% of the water can be drunk or used for man. And the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and underground. Man even can’t use them completely, because the water contains icebergs and glaciers. All what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted. How can we drink? So something must be done to protect water from polluted.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Dear Abby, I want to ask you for my advice. When I leave the school, I want to be an engineer. For years I have interested in engineering. I have made tools at home and have written articles for magazine. My father says that engineering is a suitable subject for a girl to study it. He wants me to study geography., However, I am not interested in this subject at all. I tried to read books on it, so I was so bored. What should I do? I respect my fathers judgement and experience, but I don’t think he understood me. Best wishes, |
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007.I was walking along Park Road towards the east whilean old man came out of the park on the other sides of thestreet.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and madea right turn into Park Road.The next moment the car hitthe man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the platenumber was AC864. After two minutes later, I stoppeda passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
短文改错
以下短文共有10处错误,每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenery there. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had bought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.