假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

第Ⅱ卷
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分。满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(x／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺诩处加一个漏字符号。在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，往该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Madame Curie, her father was a physics teacher, was born 76.
in 1867. Her interest in the science was encouraged by her father． 77.
Graduated from middle school at 16，she couldn’t go on with 78.
her study because Poland was under the role of Tsarist(沙皇) 79.
Russia and women are not allowed to enter college．In 1891， 80.
she left Paris and entered Pads University, where she did 81.
her research work after graduation．In 1895，she married to 82.
Pierre Curie．Pierre joined in his research and they succeeded 83.
in find the element producing radiation in 1902．One year 84.
late．they shard the Nobel Prize for physics with Becquerel． 85.

第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
I am writing to thank you for your great hospitality.
I have a good flight home and my parents and sisters 76.
were waiting for the airport to meet me. There was so 77.
many news to tell them that we stayed up talking until 78.
long after a midnight. They were interested to see my 79.
photograph, especially the one of you and your family. 80.
I learned a lot of English while staying with you. 81.
I am planning to write you regularly like a way of 82.
practicing. It would be real helpful if you could correct 83.
my mistakes. But l do hope you’ll visit us next year. 84.
I’m sure we will get very well with each other. 85.
I am looking forward to your good news.

第二卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa were
feeding their bird in its cage. They provide the bird with 76.______________
enough food and water. What puzzled us was that the 77._____________
bird did not seem happy. On his , say school the next 78.______________
morning, Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky, it 79.____________
reminded him of the alone bird in the cage, Suddenly he 80._____________
realized that why the bird was unhappy. After school he 81._____________
tried to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free. He said 82._____________
to his grandpa, "Birds need freedoms as well!" Much to 83.____________
his delighted, his grandpa agreed. The bird was set free. 84._____________
Seeing the bird fly happily in the sky, both Li Ming 85._____________
and his grandpa smiled.

IV、短文改错：（共十个小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。修改：在错词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in
greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until
the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I
still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.
As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong.
We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can
not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily
and peacefully.

第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（ √ ）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ∧ ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
Once there lived a boy was very fond of 76________
reading. But he was so poor to buy any 77________
books. So he had to borrow them from a rich man 78________
lived far away. The boy always tried 79________
hard to finish read the books and returned 80________
them to the owner within the giving time. So 81________
the rich man was ready lending him any of the 82________
books he wanted them. In this way he read a lot 83________
and late became a well-known writer of his time. 84________
However, the rich man’s son who didn’t like to study
remained a man with a little knowledge. 85________