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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号   ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线  \ 划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago. Since I came to the new school, I had planned to write to you. Therefore, the busy life of the school spared me no time. After came to the school, I made up of my mind to study hard. To tell you the truth, that was Miss White, my new English teacher, who changed my mind. She suggested that I give in my bad habits. Although he is very strict with us, all the students fond of her.
I have to stop here. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

科目 英语   题型 书面表达   难度 中等
知识点: 读写任务作文
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读写任务 (共25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As we all know, life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life. Without a good dream, people can’t make progress; without a good dream, countries can’t develop; without a good dream, the world can’t become so beautiful! And I hold the strong belief that everyone, whether he is old or young, poor or rich, junior or senior, does have a good dream! After all, dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life, and wishing for good things, however, costs nothing!
What’s more, it is important to fly our dreams, especially for those who are Senior 3 students. It is high time for them to fly their dreams. If they can’t let out dreams fly, the dream would just be a dream, not reality!
Therefore, it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood. With a nice dream, China succeeded to host the 29th Olympic Games in 2008; with a nice dream, Hongkong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997; with a nice dream, Yuan Longping rids the world of hunger; with a nice dream, Michael Jordon becomes the most popular basketball star; with a nice dream I can stand on this stage to compete in the final English speech contest. And with an aim of achieving success, I must do the best!
So my good friends, if you want to realize your dream, please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains. You must keep going forward bravely! Just fly your dream highly above the sky!
写作内容:
1. 阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点。
2. 就“放飞梦想”为主题,以120词左右发表自己的看法,并包括以下内容要点:
(1)列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例;
(2)结合自己的实际,谈谈你现在的梦想,并说明打算如何实现。
写作要求:
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准:
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

最近的一项调查表明如今的中国青年的人生目标比过去要显得多元化。这种选择的变化表明人们的生活目标较以前更为实际。

比例
目标
手段
53.5%
挣钱给自己买一房一车
71.9%的人说将通过自身努力以实现人生的目标
44%
提高生活质量
43.7%
成为富人
23.9%
找一份好工作

参考词汇:调查对象:respondent
写作要求:1. 以上述信息为材料写一段五句话的短文;
2. 句子结构准确,语言表达流畅、连贯。

书面表达(满分25分)
中央号召创建节约型社会,可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲,号召同学们从我做起,杜绝浪费。

浪费现象
危害
措施
1. 水、电
2. 餐厅的食物
3. 其他(由考生自己添加)
1. 自身性格
2. 父母财政负担
3. 自然资源
(内容由考生自己添加)

注意:(1)词数120左右,演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数。(2)不要逐字逐条翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? Now I'd like to make a speech here.
With the improvement of living standard, there are a lot of wastes on campus.Forexample, the students________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Therefore, I'm sure, with everyone doing his bit we will change the present situation for thebetter.
That's all.Thank you!

假如你是育才中学学生会主席(Chair of the Student Union)李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛
主题:人与自然
时间:6月15日下午2:00—5:00
地点:501教室
参赛选手:10名学生
联系人:李华(电话44876655)
欢迎大家光临

注意:词数100左右。
Dear Ms. Smith,

With best wishes
Li Hua

书面表达。
假设你是李华,为了培养同学们的英语学习兴趣,提高英语水平,你和你校的几位英语爱好者在互联网上建了一个
叫做easyenglish的网站。请根据表格内的信息用英语在校报上写篇短文向全校的同学介绍这个网站。

目的
培养学习兴趣,使英语学习更轻松

网站内容
丰富的英语材料,如英语习题、外国文化介绍、英语故事等
网络英语聊天
展示英语习作,交流学习体会


注意:标题与开头已给出,词数100左右。
Dear fellow students, I’like to introduce you to a new website— easyenglish.com .

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