短文改错 (共10小题；每小题 1 分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When father bought me a computer as a birthday present in last year, I felt very exciting. As we all know, computers are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately happened in the world on Internet. People had to do lots of work which was very danger. Now, computers can do it instead. When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before. The computer have become a real friend of mine.
I sing when I feel good. When I sing my most favorite songs, 1.
I feel even better. Sometimes when I am listening to music 2.
and to the song words, I feel that it is specially written for me. 3.
A good song always makes me feeling something. They 4.
help me get through with the day. I also like reading. I used 5.
to avoiding poetry until an e-pal told me that I should recite 6.
poems and not to look up the meaning of the words. 7.
At the beginning I felt quite strange. Now I always lock the 8.
door. Read aloud gives you a good feeling when you are sad. 9.
When a poem is finished , I close the book and my sad is gone. 10.
Dear Nick,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.
I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan provinceis2.
rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests.3.
Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which 4.
the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ 5.
imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built 6.
2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation 7.
today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much 8.
enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time. 9.
I am looking forward to your come.10.
Over the past twenty years, American country music become 1.
more and more popular. Some writers are no longer writing about 2.
modern values of the USA. In 1950s, American music was about other3.
things . Money was also thought to be important. Ten years late, 4.
some writers turned other subjects. During these years, many young 5.
students were angry with society. So songs were often full of angry. 6.
Political leaders were not well thought and those songs often made 7.
fun of them. Country music today remains much the same as ago. 8.
One subject which country music often returns is “the good old days”.9.
And in “the good old days”, people love life on the open air. 10.
Thank you for your e-mail ! You ask about my friends and what 1.
we like to do. I guess I do that most people do. I like reading books, 2.
watch films and listening to music. My favorite sport is volleyball. 3.
Most my friends play volleyball with me. My best friend is two older4.
years than me. She goes to a different school and we always get 5.
together after school to talk and have fun. Tell me yourself, your friends6.
and what you like to do. I would also like to know something about7.
China . We have read about China in school and I am very interesting 8.
in learning more about it. Please e-mail to me soon. Thanks. 9.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon now. 10.
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call4.
softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6.
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7.
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance8.
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.