短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加—个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
Which we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important 1.
for us to form into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we students. Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat or drink too many. All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had better have meal regularly.8.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.
Choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our2.
body is also different. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too3.
much calories for the 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the4.
high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices5.
about what and how we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer advice about what we should eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take more exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
Dear Mary,
I am sorry that you had a disagreement with your father. Personal, 76. ________
I think this is important to follow your interests and your abilities, 77. ________
but it sounds as though you have plenty of both of these already. 78. ________
Speak to your father and tell him what you are doing well in the79. ________
subject of your choice. Furthermore, remind him that many men80. ________
have chosen to work in fields that are not used to accept women. 81. ________
Ask your father to speak to your teachers and find out how well 82. ________
you are at your chosen subject. Trust you. Trust your own83. ________
thinking and your choice. Hopefully, your father will respect84. ________
your choice and let you to do what you want to. 85. ________
Best wishes.
Amy
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
It’s well known which Wilma Rudolph is the first American woman76. _____
to have won three Olympic gold medal in track! However, when77. _____
she was young, she was sick most of the time. At four, he couldn’t 78. _____
move her left leg as a result of a serious illness. Followed the 79. _____
doctor’s advice, her mother rubbed her sick leg every day and take80. _____
her to the hospital once a week. After a year, Wilma could manage 81. _____
a sort of jump. At eight, she was walking a bit at the aid of a82. _____
walking stick. Soon she was out in the yard playing the basketball.83. _____
Her mother was surprising to see that. Little by little,84. _____
Wilma became famous as a track star but won medals.85. _____
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._______
the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2. _______
Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3. _______
but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4. _______
couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _______
about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6. _______
the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It 7. _______
isn't a good time to do that, dear. ’ At once I apologize 8. _______
controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _______
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. ” 10. _______