假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our school we always find that some students dressed in Nikes, enjoying McDonald’s and crazy about NBA games. Lily, a Senior Three girl, her life is flooded with product from the USA, is one of them. When asking about her feelings towards the Western superpower, she is not surely. Lily is not the only one that feels confusing.
A resent survey show that four in five Chinese students generally like Americans, but three in five agree with that the US is trying to control China. According to the survey, nearly half the respondents chose the US as a friend country. The positive opinion of the US is more than it in last year’s similar survey.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词作斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线 ( _____ ),并在该词下面 写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, a middle-aged man goes to town to buy a colour TV set. Not far from the village
he found brown handbag on the road. After opened it, he was surprised to see a lot of money
in it. He didn’t know how to do then. He waited the owner there. About half' an hour later,
a young girl ran over to him, asking him whether he has just seen a brown handbag left there.
The man said “ Yes ” and returned to the handbag after he made sure it was belonged to her.
The young girl was very thankful to him that she wanted to give him some moneys.
But the man refused to accept it.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reason. Some families are so poor to send their children to school, so their kids have to earn money to support their families. There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school. I feel worried this. I think every children should have the opportunity to receive education. And it is necessary of us to care about the children, because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country. So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their studies.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Not all people like to work buteveryone likes to play. All over
a world, men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Many adults and
children call their friends together to spend hours, even days, play games.
One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live
happy. In other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When
people were playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good
activities for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy.
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In America big cities,
thousands people buy tickets to watch football or basketball games.
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tsai Qin, whose songs had a great affect on us, was on a brief concert tour. The next stop was Wenzhou. I looking forward to her wonderful performance. In the morning of Mar. 18th, I set off early to the stadium. When I arrived, I found lots of fans had been gathered in the front rows to get more familiar to Tsai Qin. I held my breath, waited. At last, she turned in. The fans burst into applause. The devotion we showed to a folk queen greatly touched her as we seemed not to be able to control herself and was moved to tears.