第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badlty burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the window, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
Thank you for your e-mail ! You ask about my friends and what 1.
we like to do. I guess I do that most people do. I like reading books, 2.
watch films and listening to music. My favorite sport is volleyball. 3.
Most my friends play volleyball with me. My best friend is two older4.
years than me. She goes to a different school and we always get 5.
together after school to talk and have fun. Tell me yourself, your friends6.
and what you like to do. I would also like to know something about7.
China . We have read about China in school and I am very interesting 8.
in learning more about it. Please e-mail to me soon. Thanks. 9.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon now. 10.
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call4.
softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6.
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7.
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance8.
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.
It was snowing heavy on Monday morning. Li Hua was at 1.
the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a 2.
while a bus came and she got on it. There had many passengers 3.
in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out the 4.
windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. A driver turned around 5.
and said“Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off 6.
and help push the bus.”When he heard this, Li Hua and the other 7.
passengers got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing 8.
the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All 9.
the passengers were smiling but the sun was shining. 10.
One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa are 1.
feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy 2.
because it had enough food and water. Li Ming.did not 3.
know why not. The next morning on his way to school, 4.
Li Ming saw some birds flew in the sky. Then he thought 5.
about the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his 6.
grandpa to set the bird free. When he got to home, he said 7.
to his Grandpa,“Birds also need friends!” To his delighted , his 8.
grandpa agreed.The bird set free. Grandpa and the children 9.
were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky. 10.
Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking，and 1.
he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen 2.
smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room, 3.
Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went 4.
back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed, 5.
he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later，Jack's mother 6.
smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jack's bedroom. Good heavens! 7.
Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got some 8.
water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson. “I'll give up 9.
smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.10.