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A Frenchman is once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English. So after he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying. Then he walked on. At last, he got lost. In several hours he found a policeman .The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street. He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It was read : “One-way street”.
Recently I took part a geography research study group. Our topic 1.
is environmental pollution and protection.We took a variety2.
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 3.
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our4.
surroundings. Some people throw rubbish anywhere where they like; 5.
somecars give off harmful gases and waste water are poured into the6.
riversby some factories. Worse still, people sometime have to make 7.
themway through dusty winds as a result of the the pollution. Through 8.
our research, we come to know that everybody must pay more attention 9.
to our environment and some measure should be taken10.
When he was senior 3 student in a high school, Li Hua studied 1.
very hard so as to go to a famous university. He often stays up late2.
in the night. Finally he passed the College Entrance Examination 3.
and was admitted to a key university. And after he went to university,4.
he became very lazy. He wasted time in going to the cinema, played 5.
cards, making friends and doing things that had something to do with 6.
his studies. He often got up late. At many times, he was still in 7.
bed while others were having his lessons in the classroom at ten in 8.
the morning . Int the end of the first term he failed in all exams. As a 9.
result, he had to give up his schooling and leave the university. 10.
One day after school, on the way to home, Xiao Ming found a 1.
water pipe in the street. He turned off a tap and splashed water 2.
here and there. At this moment , Xiao Gang happened to be 3.
passing by. Xiao Ming splashed him with water and make him 4.
all wet. Xiao Ming ran away with turning off the tap.5.
When Xiao Gang saw this, she went over and turned off the water. 6.
He was angry because he thought water shouldn’t wasted. 7.
Then he went home and wrote a notice where read “ save water” 8.
He put them up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Xiao Ming9.
went back and saw the notice. He felt sorry at what he had done. 10.
Today I showed some foreign friends in our city. We started 1.
off by a car from the Friendship Hotel at 8 o’clock am. We first went 2.
to the Zhongshan Park. We were both struck by its beautiful flowers 3.
there. Then, we visited the city museum. We saw plenty of valuable 4.
things, from them we learned more about the city. After that we 5.
devote to the Jinshan Temple. There is a beautiful place of interest in6.
our city, but from there we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of the 7.
sea.We had a delicious lunch at the Seafood Restaurant and come 8.
back at 1:20 pm. All the foreign friends were pleased my arrangement. 9.
I was happy that we do have a wonderful time today.10.
Once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not hope to get reward without hard work. 10.