假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney
last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take
us to do a lot of sightseeing. It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and
delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about
Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. I’ll act like a guide
to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to 76.
travel with their friends, while I chose to take par-time job 77.
to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my 78.
teacher that a nearby company was looking after students 79.
with good handwriting to write address on envelope. The 80.
pay were 10 cent per envelope. I headed for the company, 81.
feeling sue I would easy finish 300 envelops in five hours and 82.
to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I 83.
fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out 84.
of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.85.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线撒谎能够画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day, while my friend and I was traveling through 76__________
Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little 77__________
money. We decided stop at a village market to buy 78__________
something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and79.__________
ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great. 80__________
“Let’s got some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they 81__________”
really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but 82__________
I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. 83._________
She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” 84._________
I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said. 85._________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分,满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
For as long as I can remember , I have been very bad
at arguing with people . As soon as someone agree 76．___________
with me , I get angry because I feel attacking , like the 77．___________
other person is out to show that I am right . And for 78．___________
some reason , I hate being wrong ! But my immediate 79．___________
reaction is to get very defensive . I rise my voice , and 80．___________
I end up saying something I later regret . Needless to say, 81．___________
the whole thing ends with me blaming for myself , and the 82．___________
other person felt alienated (疏远的) from me . This 83．___________
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate ! 84．___________
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my 85．___________
being afraid of being wrong .
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分,满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
For as long as I can remember, I have been very bad
at arguing with people . As soon as someone agree 76．_______
with me, I get angry because I feel attacking, like the 77．_______
other person is out to show that I am right . And for 78．_______
some reason , I hate being wrong! But my immediate 79．_______
reaction is to get very defensive. I rise my voice, and 80．_______
I end up saying something I later regret. Needless to say, 81．_______
the whole thing ends with me blaming for myself , and the 82．_______
other person felt alienated (疏远的) from me. This 83．_______
bothers me especially because my mother does the exactly
same thing and I hate! 84．_______
Right now the problem is urgent because my relationship
with a wonderful boyfriend is in dangerous because of my 85．_______
being afraid of being wrong .
The others day, on his way back from school, Li Ming1._____
found a strange-looked toy car lying on the grass.2._____
Curiously, he picked it out and played with it. To his3.______
great surprising, suddenly ,the toy became larger and larger . 4.______
Finally it changed into a real car .A moment Li Ming5.______
got into the car ,from a speaker above coming a stranger’s6._____
voice: “Please input your address on the screen in front of7._____
you, and fastened your seat belt. You will go wherever8._____
you like ”. As a boy full of adventures, Li Ming decided to 9._____
take a risk and try on this magic car …. 10.____