假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One quiet weekend some men broke into a shop next a bank. Then they made the hole in the wall and got into the bank. One of their friends were watching the bank from a flat on the another of the road. He had the duty of telling the men inside if there was any dangerous. The men talked to each other by the radio, but someone else hearing their conversation. The police was told, and they couldn’t find the right bank. Finally the robbers run away with a lot of money.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying, 76．________
“Time is money”, this shows the importance of time. When 77．________
time has gone, it will never return back. 78．________
It is a pity when many people make poor use of time. They 79．________
spend precious time sleeping, drinking and traveling. 80．________
They don’t realize wasting time is equal to waste part of their life. 81．________
They always regret having made a little achievement so far.82．_______
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 83．________
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness 84．________
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 85．________
of poverty and even death.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，共15分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Ron,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to76._________
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school 77. _________
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. 78. _________
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment.79. _________
There are two teach buildings, one is for seniors and the 80. _________
other is for juniors. There are two lab building and 81. _________
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and 82. _________
chemistry, we have some electives (选修课). The 83. _________
students can choose that they like to attend. We84. _________
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.85. _________
Yours,
Li Hua
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√），如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I would 76. ________
want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but 77. ________
a party. Father said OK. When I recited the name of my seven 78. ________
friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didn’t 79. ________
include my new neighbor Tom. I told him I didn’t like to be with 80. ________
a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I 81. ________
seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom 82. ________
came besides my seven friends. Very quick we became good 83. ________
friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving 84. ________
myself a chance. It was really unforgettable birthday. 85. ________
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿））。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
On a snowy winter night，a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all lf them were rapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it．They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw what happened．He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally helps came. All of them were thankful with their help.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个对号；如多词，则用（ \ ）划掉；如缺词，则在此处加一个（^），并把正确的写在横线上；如错一词，则在此词下面划线，，在右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A lady once wrote a long story and sent to a famous editor. 76____________
In a few weeks the story was returned to her. The lady got 77.____________
angrily. She wrote to the editor. “Dear sir , yesterday you 78.____________
sent back the story of mine. How do you know why the 79.____________
story is not good? You did not read it .After I sent it 80.____________
to you, I pasted (粘) together pages 18, 19 or 20. This was 81.____________
a test to see whether you would real read the story.82.____________
When it came back yesterday, the pages still pasted together. 83.____________
Is this the way where you read all the stories that are sent 84.____________
to you?” The editor wrote back “Dear madam, at breakfast 85.___________
when I open an egg, I don’t have to eat all the eggs in order to
discover that it is bad.”