假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

VI.短文改错 8%（共8处错, 其中68题有7处错，划线处除外。）
67. _______. I don’t doubt whether it was German soldiers who stole the amber room.
68. _______The Great Wall, one of the wonder in the world, has a history of over two thousand years and covering most parts of the north of China. Because it is regarded as the longest wall in the world. Qing Shi Huang, the first Chinese emperor, keep the enemy out of his empire(帝国)，had all the walls join up. It really takesmillions of people many years to build it at that time. Today it has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese and to people from all over the world. As the famous saying goes, “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”

第二节：短文改错（共10题，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中共有十处错误，仔细阅读并改正。改正方法如下：
句中多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；句中缺一词：在缺词处加一个添字符号（∧），并在句子下方写出需要添加的词；句中有错词：在错的词处下划一横线，并在下方写出正确用词。第十一处开始不得分。如：Do you knew a man who have has worked∧Shengsi Middle School?
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When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Sweden decided to find whether it was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them have lived many years. At last the one who had to drink tea every day died in the age of 83 and the other lived much long. Therefore Sweden is today one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk.

VI. 短文改错
找出下面一段文章中的错处并改正。如该行缺一词，在文中缺词处标上“ ”，并在相应的横线上写上正确的词语；如该行多一词，在文中用斜线划掉多余的词，并在相应的横线上写上该词，用斜线划去；如该行错一词，在文中用横线标出，再在相应的横线上写上正确的词语。如该行无错，在相应的横线上打上“ ” 。
示例：
Betty wants to be nurse and works with sick people a
who need her helps.help
Last summer Betty had broke her leg. had
The pain was very great and she couldn’t walk.
The telephone rang and I picked out the receiver(话筒). “Hello,” 69.____________
I said. “Hello,” said the voice. “Bill here, is Betty there?” 70.____________
“I’m sorry,” I said, “You have got the wrong number.” 71.____________
A few seconds late, the telephone rang again. Just 72.____________
as I expected he was Bill, “You have made a mistake again.” 73.____________
I explained. The telephone rang a third time. This made I 74.____________
angry. I speak in a big voice, “Hello, Bill, Betty here.” 75._____________
For a moment there was a dead silent. Then someone said, 76._____________
“What’s the wrong with you, Tom?” It was my mother. 77._____________
I could do anything but say sorry to my mother. 78_____________

I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamed
of I took part in a race.At first,I could not run very
fast and fell behind.So I didn’t lose heart and kept
running.All the students on the playground cheer me on,
“Come on!”I was too encouraged that I ran faster and faster
till I caught up with all the other runners.I felt as if to flying like
a superman.By the end,I got to the finishing line first.
I won the race.I felt very proud myself.Many of my
classmate threw me up into the air.Just at that time
I woke up and found me still in bed!

短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）
Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home. I came across child from another planet. His clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautifully. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laughing, but suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. Seeing that, I was offered to help him. His home had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon before making the call he disappeared.