假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.
However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.
As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home, 4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.
I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work . 10.___________
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. 1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there 2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because 3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two. 4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was 5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the 6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even 7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble 8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth 9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy! 10.____________
How many time do you spend with your parents? 1.___________
Your parents are your dearer people in the world 2.___________
when you are young. And they always care of you 3.___________
deep. But even though many children still love their 4.___________
mum and dad, families may become more close 5.___________
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for 6.___________
families to get together. Have you ever thought of 7.___________
how you can show your parents that you love them? 8.___________
Find a chance and do something for them or to have 9.___________
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents 10.___________
will be very happy.