假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was really pleased to my purchase of a new pair of shoes from major retailer (零售商). About a week late, on a rainy day, I was in a rush and quick grabbed my shoes from the rack (架子) and made my way into town. To my horrible, I felt a wet sensation inside my right shoe – it is leaking.
I returned to the shop to complaining about the leaking right shoe. At customer service, the assistants looked at both shoes and said, “Yes, sir, you’re correct – the right shoe leaks, and unfortunately only the left shoe was bought from this store.” My apology was as more swift as my departure.
文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(入)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribe .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that what I could change my clothes at last.
此题要求改正所给句中的错误。每题只有一个错误，按下列情况改正：此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该句右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该句右边横线上写出该加的词。此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：此题没有正确的题。She was boring with her present work.
Although he failed again, he would not lose his heart.
General speaking, more men smoke than women do.
You are sure to have a fun in having a picnic at the weekend.
Neither he nor I has finished the experiment.
They suggest go out for a picnic on top of the hill.
His grandpa died three years before.
I think it is wrong for you to stare at others.
He convinced me the difficulty of the work.
He is very strict in his students.
句子改错（每小题1分，共10分，每句只有一处错误）。
多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉.
缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该词下边写出改正后的词
错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出改正后的词。Do you want a friend whom you could tell everything to , as your deepest feelings and thoughts?
I am having any trouble with my classmates at the moment.
At first the English speaking in England between about AD450 and 1150 was very
different from the English we speak today.Although many Americans move a lot, but they still recognize and understand each
other.Wang Wei soon got them interesting in cycling.
The army organized teams to dig out those who was trapped and to bury the dead.
At one point we were so highly that we found ourselves cycling through clouds.
Here are my neighbours who home was destroyed by the earthquake.
He was generous with his time , for whom I was grateful.
My sister and I have dreamed about take a great bike trip..
This morning on my way school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man
was counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running
and knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In no
time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood here, not know
what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The old
man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,
there are now a lot of nice people in our life. It’s true that honesty is more important than
money!
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加.删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.