假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间相互交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌-优题课

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的下方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Knowing it was my last high school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience for all of us. We first attended the opening parade, for our class had made a lot of preparations. Our parade took up the shape of the letter “V”, indicated victory for ourselves. To our excitement, our parade performance was a great success. Before the parade, the games started. My classmates attended various event and their performances were very impressively. Finally, the result was announced. It was amazing that our class won the second place. I believe this sports meeting will be remain a precious memory for all of us as time goes by.

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Republic of Ireland, its capital is Dublin, lies just to the west of the UK. It has a population of more than 4 million and cover an area of more than 70,000 square kilometers. Everywhere you look for are castles and historical places. It has a mildly sea climate. That is not too cold in winter and not too hot in summer. There are two official languages in Ireland: Irish, which is a national language, or English, which is the language of the majority of the population. Ireland is really attractive with a lot of people. So if you had a chance to come here, you are sure have a good time.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两个错误；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
My neighbor’s children love playing hide-and-seek as other children do ，and nobody had imagined that the game they played it last week would be reported on the local newspaper. One afternoon, they are playing at the street comer. Paul, only five year old, hid and locked himself in a storage mailbox by accident. His sister, Nancy, heard his cries and realized that had happened, so she immediately asked a mailman open the metal door. Paul was free，but he had such bad a scare that he could not stop cry. The mailman told him that next time he wanted to hide in a mail box, he should remember to put the stamp on himself. When he heard that ，Paul burst into laughters

第一节：单句改错（共5小题，每题1分，满分5分）
I would like to change this red coat with a green one .
We all find English of great important in the world today .
We are sure his coming on time .
The students as well as their teacher has arrived at the school gate.
He thought he could pass the driving test ,however he failed .

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.