1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two years ago, Mr. Smith taught myself English. He was friendly to us student. Though he was strict in the students, he was respected. However, he was always careful and forgot things, that brought him a lot of trouble. For example, once he was on the holiday by the sea and he forgot which hotel he was staying in. After dark, he didn’t know where stay for the night. It was his wife who find him under a big tree behind the hotel. Heard this experience, we all burst into laughter. Such are Mr. Smith, a man whom everyone looks up to.
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For 76. _______
example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 77. _______
in a secret place where I couldn't find. Then he 78. _______
ate it all, by himself. He never helped other. 79. _______
He said he is busy. That is, a game of 80. _______
tennis making him very busy. He did not care 81. _______
if something he did made people angry. For82. _______
instance, on one night he played strong and 83. _______
loudly music till four o'clock in the morning. But 84. _______
he is difference now. He often helps grandma with 85. _______
housework, helps mom with cooking and helps
his classmates with their lessons.
What should you do when your parents become angry? If your 76. _______
parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them 77. _______
about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually 78. _______
will try to change, but they will take some time because 79. _______
they get angry all their life, and that is all they know. You 80. _______
might have to change for your method a couple of times. 81. _______
Do any nice things for your parents that they don't expect 82. _______
— like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean 83. _______
the floors. If this doesn't work, bring in friend that you 84. _______
feel comfortable, and have him or her help you. 85. _______
Last week my parents and I took a twoday trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous 76. _______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 77. _______
was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 78. _______
the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 79. _______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 80. _______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 81. _______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 82. _______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top 83. _______
of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was 84. _______
good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 85. _______
head touched the pillow.
I'm the captain of our school team so with my 76. _________
fellow players we've won several games. There 77. _________
will an important game next month. But one of the 78. _________
best players in our team told me just then that he 79. _________
wouldn't play basketball once more. His parents 80. _________
asked him to spend in more time preparing for the 81. _________
college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. 82. _________
But his parents think go to college is more important 83. _________
than playing sports and college was the only place 84. _________
for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no 85. _________
choice. He wanted to make his parents happy.
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young
people. According to studies, any children spend more time 76. _______
watching television than they spend in school. Because so 77. _______
much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of 78. _______
read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 79. _______
much about the radio program young people listen to, 80. _______
although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about 81. _______
the effects of television commercials. On one year the 82. _______
average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all 83. _______
planned and written by grownups to make children to want 84. _______
things that they don't real need.85. _______