假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a classmate named Angel, who is a lovely and bright girl. She is popular from all the classmates. One day, news came as Angel had got blood cancer. It really shocked everybody. When I saw her in the hospital, I could not help cry. She was very thin and weak that it seemed only skin and bones were left. But her face was so pale, she gave us a big smile to comfort us. All the classmates and teachers began to raise money. Some called media for help. In the end, I succeeded in raising the money for the first operation. We will keep trying until Angel was cured. Many people offered as more help as they could even though they did not know Angel. I am really touched by this. There is love in everywhere as long as we seek for it.
第三节短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l．5分，满分l5分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：妞无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(、／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺—个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I just come back from Britain last week．I Was 76._______
luckily enough to be one of the students from many 77. ________
different country to visit the UK from Feb．16 to 28． 78. ___________
We paid a visit to a good many of places，like London， 79. _________
0xford or the Lake District．I learned much about British 80. _________
culture and history in London， where was my favorite． 81._________
I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings． 82. ________
The Lake District was beautiful，but it was pity that it 83.__________
rained heavily when we were there．The most excited thing 84._________
for me in Britain was that I made a lot of friends there． 85. _________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分。满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(x／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺诩处加一个漏字符号。在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，往该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Madame Curie, her father was a physics teacher, was born 76.
in 1867. Her interest in the science was encouraged by her father． 77.
Graduated from middle school at 16，she couldn’t go on with 78.
her study because Poland was under the role of Tsarist(沙皇) 79.
Russia and women are not allowed to enter college．In 1891， 80.
she left Paris and entered Pads University, where she did 81.
her research work after graduation．In 1895，she married to 82.
Pierre Curie．Pierre joined in his research and they succeeded 83.
in find the element producing radiation in 1902．One year 84.
late．they shard the Nobel Prize for physics with Becquerel． 85.
第二卷（非选择题）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共1小题，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies. The process is more important than the result is. Now there are only 90days being left before the test. I am not sure his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.
五：短文改错 (满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
After supper Li Hua came and asked me go86.____
and see a film with him. In our way to 87 .____
the cinema we saw the little girl sitting by 88 .____
the roadside cry. We bought her a cake to 89 .____
stop her crying. But when we asked where she 90.____
had lived, she said she did not know. So 91.____
when we took her to the police station and 92 .____
asked the police to take care for her. After 93.____
this we went to the cinema, But when we94.____
got there the movie was near at its end. 95..____
We missed the movie, but we did a good deed.
第二节短文改错（每小题1分，满分10分）
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the
heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting 76. ____________
off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all 77. ____________
in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields 78. ____________
and some farm houses. We could hear the sound of the rain 79. ____________
and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon 80. ____________
we reached the top of the mountain. That surprised us 81. ____________
most there was the beauty of the scenes. After having short 82. ____________
rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started 83. ____________
going down. It had rained even harder. We were wet 84. ____________
to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily. 85. ___________