假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Good health is the most valuable possession a person can have, 76. _______
so one can not regard good health as certain to happen. It’s 77. ________
important to remember that body needs proper care in order 78. ________
to be healthy. There are three things that a person can do stay 79. ________
in good shape. Firstly, eat the right foods is good for health. 80. ________
Vegetables and fruits are specially important. Enough sleep 81. ________
is also important. Finally, get plenty of exercises. Sports are 82. ________
not only good for one’s body, but it can also help build 83. ________
friendship with others p
eople. If everyone were to do the three, 84. ________
the world would be a happier and healthy place. 85. ________
第二节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
A helicopter is sometime more useful than a big plane. When 11＿＿＿＿＿＿
it takes off, it goes straight on. When it lands, it comes12____________
straight down. It needs not only a small place for both taking13 ___________
off and landing. When a tall building is on fire, we can14____________
see a helicopter to come down to rescue the people on the top 15 ___________
of them. Helicopters make many kinds of work easy. They are 16____________
used to making maps, flying over the ground and taking pictures17____________
from the air. To rescue people whom are very 18____________
sick or in danger, helicopters are send to some faraway19____________
areas. The helicopter takes place of a car or a train20____________
in some areas.
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I’m the only daughter of my parents. But they worry 76. __________
about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my 77. __________
parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might 78. __________
fall off from my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble 79. __________
to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box. 80. __________
I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” 81. __________
Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything 82. __________
for their children. This does no good to them. Too many love from 83. __________
parents may prevent them from independent. In my opinion, 84. __________
parents should let their children do that they should do alone. 85. __________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；
如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mother’s Day was around the corner. My good friend 76. __________
Alice, Jenny and I get together, discussing what we should do to 77. __________
our respect for. Alice was planning to buy some flowers with 78. __________
his pocket money in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy 79. __________
vegetables to cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because80. __________
she wanted to experience how many her mother does for her family 81. __________
every day. As for me, I’d like to make a greeting card, said 82. __________
“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother 83. __________
to pay attention to health or promise her to study harder. 84. __________
We are looking forward to Mother’s Day. 85. __________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Our school invited a foreign teacher who was working in a76.
college in our city give a lecture to the students of Senior77.
Grade Two. The lecture was very interested. I learned 78. ___________
a lot of from him. The teacher had a free talk with us in easy79. ___________
English. He spoke slow so that we could understand him80. ___________
well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand. 81. ___________
My classmates were all active in the lecture. To my joyful, 82. ___________
I understood everything the teacher said. But I was 83. ___________
glad to ask question in English . This lecture encouraged me84.___________
very much. I’m sure we keep on practicing , it will be 85.___________
easy for us to learn spoken English well.