假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the followingadvices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that youlack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．Onesmile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will showthat you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you orwho share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and youcan also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to helphim or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断;如无错误,在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。原行没有错的不要改。
As we know, our country suffer heavy snow last 76. _________
Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavily 77. _________
snow, that made the buses, trains and planes stop. 78. _________
Million of people couldn't go home. Many people 79. _________
suffered trouble. There were no food, water or light in 80. _________
some places. Our government called on people to fight 81. _________
against the heavy snow. As a student, I think they should 82. _________
learn from that the heroes. We must study hard at school. 83. ________
We should learn all kinds knowledge to make our 84. _________
motherland strong, better and richer. 85. _________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
Our school has required us to get several minutes earlier76．_________
so that we could spend a little minutes every morning exercising． 77．_________
This is to encourage the students form healthy lifestyles．78．_________
Some are against it, because they believe that it is very good for 79．_________
their health; however, others are against it and said they need80．________
more sleep．To my opinion, we should overcome our difficulties 81．________
to do what the school asks．Early to bed and early to rise 82．________
makes a person healthy, wealthy and wisely．Students can keep fit 83．_________
by doing exercise but gain more energy to perform better in class． 84．_________
This can also help students form healthy lifestyles．
Therefore, it is good idea that students exercise every morning．85．________
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
If someone asks you how you can make you always 76. ________
happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 77. ________
a proper answer．Did you remember the old saying“No 78. ________
human being can really happy who is not giving or trying 79. ________
to give happiness to others”? If you will always think of 80. ________
taking more from others and give them less，you won’t be 81. ________
able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich.82. ________
Here’s an article for you. If each of you follow it, there 83. ________
will be all end of many unhappy days of yours．So you should 84. ________
learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so. 85. ________
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive (敏感) topic. 76. ______________
No one can live with money in modern society. People77. ______________
have different opinions on them. Some people think one should 78. ______________
live to make money, and others, make money to live. 79. ______________
In my opinion, the latter (后一种) view may be much reasonable. 80. ______________
We should not be the slaves of money. Although money 81. ______________
means a lot of in our life, it does not mean everything. We 82. ______________
cannot exchange (交换) it friendship or love. Money indeed can 83. ______________
make a person enjoy his life for a while but all his life. 84. ______________
In a word, money is something but not anything. 85. ______________
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Last Sunday, my father invited his colleagues to our home for a
dinner party, included his boss. However, my three-year-old sister 76. _________
stared at my father’s boss sitting across from her all time during 77. _________
the dinner. He can hardly eat because of her stare. So embarrassed 78. _________
was the boss so that he checked his tie, touched his face 79. _________
and look at himself in the mirror. Even so, nothing stopped her 80. _________
staring at him. He tried to pay not attention to my sister, 81. _________
and finally it was too much for him. He couldn’t help asking 82. _________
her, “How are you staring at me?” Everybody present had noticed 83. _________
her behavior and the table went quietly for her response. My 84. _________
sister replied, “My daddy said you are a big eater and I don’t 85. _________
want to miss it!”