假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文字共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.I tried to chat with some of them.To my surprised, I found the orally English of some junior students was better than mine.I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions.With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good mews to tell to you. ______
I win a national prize for painting last week. ______
My father was so pleasing that he suggested ______
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying ______
There for half a month, visiting place of interest ______
Or practicing my English as well. We’ve been ______
Writing to each for nearly a year now. I have ______
often dreamed of talk face to with you. ______
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that ______
Time. Perhaps we could go out to do some ______
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily
此题要求在答题卡上改正所给短文中的错误。请根据上下文对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上划一个勾；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）, 则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 在该行右边横线上写出应加的单词。
此行错一个词：在错词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的单词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital
With a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other
day when he let a bicycle ran right into him . He never
watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble.
But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable.
room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read.
Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him
Lost of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time
From school because he is busy study what he has
Missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than Expected and will b out of hospital a few weeks.
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have
something very preciously in my room.It’s not a CD player or
a cell phone.It’s the view outside my window.I’m lucky live
near a park.My window faces with the tops of the trees in the
park,below the trees I can see child on the playground,
young couples walked quietly,mothers playing with children,
and old people sitting on the benches.The whole world seem to
be before their eyes.My classmates like to surf the Internet or
listen to music,but when I have a free time,I just sit in my
room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone: the view.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
A shopkeeper once found that a bag money＿＿＿＿
had been stolen from his shop． He went to the＿＿＿＿
judge（法官） and tell him about his loss（损失）．＿＿＿＿
The judge ordered all people of the shop＿
to come before him． He took a number of the＿＿＿＿
sticks of equal length（长度） or gave one stick＿＿＿＿＿＿
to each person． Then he said， “Come after me＿＿＿＿＿＿
again tomorrow． I’ll then know which of you are＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
the thief because the stick given to a thief＿＿＿
will be one inch longer than the other．”＿＿＿