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Having drank too much, Alfred was driving along the country road at top speed while his car ran into an old man who was walking across the road. After looking around and thinking there was not a single person see the accident, he drives off without taking the old man to the hospital. The old man was frightening but kept the car number on his mind. About one month late, they went to court. Alfred’s lawyer said:” Alfred is experienced driver of more than 20 years.” “ If experience can prove that, here, you see, the old man had walked safe for over 60 years,” the old man’s lawyer replied.
When a young man starts to earn his own living,he
can no longer expect others to pay his food,his clothes, 1.
or his room,but he has to work till he wants to live 2.
comfortable.If he spends most of his time playing 3.
about in the way that he used to as a child,they will go 4.
hungry.And if he breaks the laws of society that he used 5.
to break the laws of his parents,he may go to the prison. 6.
If,therefore,he works hard,keeps out of trouble and has 7.
better health,he can have the great happiness of seeing 8.
himself to make steady progress in his job and of 9.
building up for himself his own position in society. 10.
The Problem with Television
Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago, 1.
I was used to watch it every night.I was often 2.
a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV 3.
demands very little effort.Unfortunate,there are 4.
too many people among my family.Some wanted 5.
to see the programme while others preferred 6.
another.I am happy with any programme but 7.
the others spent a lot time arguing and there 8.
was no way of settling the matter except by 9.
selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. 10.
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1.
hobby which is both interested and fun.And every year 2.
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime.Starting 4.
your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 5.
Holidays and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6.
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7.
the world.So once you’ve started collecting seriously,you 8.
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’Club 9.
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10.
Dear Bill,
Thank you for all of your kindness.I really enjoy staying at 1.
your home for one month.Would you like very much visit 2.
me in Beijing in next August?My cousin will have his 3.
first time home stay in Virginia next summer,and you can 4.
use his room!Don’t be too surprise when you see it 5.
though.He is crazy with soccer,so he has many pictures 6.
of famous soccer player on the wall.His room is very 7.
comfortable,and you will enjoy staying in it.In his room 8.
there is the TV set.It is not a big one,but it is clear and 9.
bilingual(双语的).You can watch movies and the news in 10.
English.Also,you can use my cousin’s CD player.
Dear John,
Last summer I take a parttime job in the International 1.
Camp for children.I have been told one more worker 2.
will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.How 3.
about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.
close to a river.It is so a beautiful place!We can hear 5.
birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in 6.
tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five 7.
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.
area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.
experience.If you have interests in it,reply to me soon. 10.
Yours,
Li Ping